| Reviews for What Lies Beyond Ever Grande |
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   Ashmole chapter 6 . 5/5/2019 Dont know if you will ever get this since it has been years but Wallace is canonically Stevens fabulous older brother. |
| Lilac Gemini chapter 10 . 4/17/2016 Wow. And Steven thought he was being vivid... |
| Alex The Rogue chapter 13 . 5/2/2015 Ridiculous, but way too cute and incredibly hot not to be awesome. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 2/26/2015 This is a little.. off topic (not really) but how come in every yaoi fanfic I read I never see any docking? Lol Pretty weird question but think about it. |
| legendofpanties chapter 7 . 1/3/2015 This chapter is hard to head, the format looks a bit messed up. |
| legendofpanties chapter 5 . 1/3/2015 What... what about Brendans pokemon? |
| legendofpanties chapter 2 . 1/3/2015 Brendan is quite the asshole.I wasn't expecting that, but it definitely makes the story more interesting. |
| legendofpanties chapter 1 . 1/3/2015 This is pretty adorable. This chapter was the perfect length, and it was entertaining. I love how he called his Aron Princess xP |
| grandshadowseal chapter 1 . 12/27/2014 reminds me of mornings! only the Aron is my dog... she'll jump on me to wake me up and she's not exactly small! XD |
| Featherstorm27 chapter 13 . 12/24/2014 Aww this fic was super cute and sweet; I'm gonna get cavities from that ending, damn... Cool plot, I really liked how it developed. Also, can I just say that I love how your Brendan wasn't really overpowered, he was just a regular trainer? Everyone always makes protagonists to be op because you play as them, but making Brendan an average trainer was a nice, realistic addition. Also the smut in the last chapters was great. Man, there are so many other things I want to point out that are awesome about this fic, but then I'd have a really long list! So in a nutshell, thanks for a wonderful read! |
| EchoSkies chapter 13 . 12/9/2014 Being perfectly honest, I never had played the original Pokemon Ruby and Saphires (basically keeping me away from this lovely couple). I love the shifts in perspectives throughout the story! Also, it's absolutely amazing how Brendan goes to Unova and finds the perfect stone for Steven! (My little heart's still swooning) I like how both of their dad's are just supportive (Steven's dad is verbally ironic..haha!) The smut is hot and I like how Brendan's just like, "Yes I dream for the Champion to f*** me and ***************!" (Yeah...I don't have much of an imagination) I'm really glad that I stumbled upon this story and it makes me want to restart my Omega Ruby game. To conclude, this story is absolutely fantastic and you (the author) are amazing with your writing skills! Thank you for this wonderful story! |
| werehogdog chapter 1 . 12/2/2014 Aww! Aron is only one year old how cute! |
| werehogdog chapter 13 . 12/1/2014 Cute story I loved it! |
| werehogdog chapter 3 . 12/1/2014 Oh I can't wait to see Brendan's surprise when he finds out who the Champion is. Great chapter! |
| C.B. Magique chapter 13 . 1/5/2014 This story is so beautiful! The romance is actual perfect. I love it. I love you for writing this. |
