This story is not complete right! It's given as complete! don't stop here need more adventure and romance and contests and humour!

Love it!

update? :D

Really awesome story! I enjoyed reading it. And I could totally imagine Gloria. Like brother like sister! Or was it mother-no no-father-wait-Aaa you get my point.

Please continue this! If you are, then you get a big cheer from me. If your not, then, that's to bad :(

I like how you made it in the format of a Pokemon episode.

ManaManaphy

Wow, that was a very good plot and I enjoyed it greatly!

Are you continuing it? I loved this episode! Awsome!

I actually really liked it. Drew's sister is a believable character, nothing's rushed, and the narration is a very nice touch. I'm hoping there's a good next chapter to look forward to. Good work!

-Flute.

i dont see y you do it like an episode and leave off with a cliff hanger i really liked though i think you should make it all one story

Cute Story I Contestshippy moments I love it hope for more :)

Awh, cute. :)