I hope you do publish more books, commercially or via fan fiction, and I hope that your MBA (like mine) becomes a way to pay the bills while you write. There are very, very few multi-million publishing contracts out there for anyone who isn't a celebrity, but there are contracts to be had for good writers, and you certainly qualify. Thanks for The Carpenter Blueprints, and best wishes.

Kincaid...not KinKaid. And a few grammar and spelling errors. I would like to volunteer to help you with editing, and I mean it, if you like. I will check the reviews on this chapter for a response if you would like some help in that regard, no problem

Mavra, nor Marva, Titania, not Tatania. Wonderful, so far, looking forward to the rest

20 chapters of the best character development of Molly Carpenter I've ever seen.

The story of Michael and the Dragon was a good parallel to Molly's experiences. I'd like to see more father - daughter moments like this.

That was a creative plot twist. Margaret and Molly are a good team.

Wow, that was a rather intense moment between Lara and Dresden. I'm glad he survived with his virtue intact.

I love The Carpenter Blueprints

Thomas...loved this series. Fits in well with JB's books. I actually had to stop reading yours until I finished all the Dresden books, then finished your story, then read Ghost Story. Just started Cold Days. It would be great if you could continue your story, even if you went AU.

Keep up the great work!

You are an awesome writer.

Hey there...I just finished book 3 and have failed to review before now (got caught up in the story)...anyway just wanted to say, "well done". You have talent. Thanks for a great storyline. I look forward to reading book 4, but have to wait until I get through the rest of the canon Dresden books (im a recent convert). Thanks again!

WOW... Well done doesn't begin to cover it. It's reading stories like this that keep me writing trying to raise the bar.

How you tied it all together at the end and the rag lady thing... Just awesome. I would gush more, but it's probably as embarassing for you as it is for me so, let me just say that it was well wort the wait to get to the ending!

Definately keep writing and good luck with your school work!

I loved the story as a whole answers a lot of question about how Molly possibly became the rag lady.

so i really didnt see that one coming. it is amazing to now look back and realize that this was all really to explain how molly got to be under lea's teaching. i have to say i almost cried when i got to the part of molly being told that she is nothing to harry and that she never will be anything. great story and looking forward to reading whatever you get into next

Simply amazing.

There were a few ups and downs and I really don't like stories that turn out to be a dream. But I have to say it really was a pleasure reading this. Great job making this fit in so well.