I'm on Page 4 and I don't want to continue reading. My suggestion is get this to Steven Spielberg immediately if not sooner. He would be nuts if he doesn't consider this project. Good Luck, I really hope this becomes a movie soon.

Wow, just like Wow, more more more!

I'm so hooked! Hope you finish the story some time.

Loved reading Roy's Return and like to this in movies before up the writing on Roy's Return

Mig fighters are russsian.. Americans worldwide f18 or other planes.

Great story wonder. But you can't court Marshall a civilian only military people.. should fix that to arrested/detained .

I have read all thirteen chapters. I found them looking for a sequel to the movie. I enjoyed your writing although it has several spelling errors and a few grammatical. You are a competent writer with a good imagination. Now I am looking forward to the rest. When might that be?
Thank you!

PLEASE CONTINUE! ! FASCINATING!

Great read, thank you. Hope you will finish story one day.

I love your writing and am desperate for the conclusion!

This is great! I just read up through chapter 13 and I can't wait to see the conclusion. I'm happy you are doing this, I had always hoped for some type of sequel story and you are dong a great job.

Beautiful si far. Keep it up.

If this is still goin' on, I'd love to read more!

First of all thank you for continuing the story of Roy Leary. I must say the pace of the story is good, I am not a writer, but I am a reader. And I appreciate the direction that you the writer are taking the story. I look forward to more of your chapters until the culmination of Roy's story and again thank you for your imagination.

WOW! I hope you continue.