You can't do something like that to us readers! My emotions! Last chapter I was about to cry and now I'm so happy! Ugh! Idk how to feel except that now Zevran is ok!

:'( this had to be one of the hard chapters I ever read... I think i teared up a bit for quite a few moments. I feel Zevran's pain and denial.

OH MY GOD! NOOOO! Airam!

Yaassss love the 3 rules of being an assassin.

Whoa... maybe someone should have mention that taking Airam was a bad idea? The whole team was pissed and ready to do what no one else could, tearing down a seemingly unstoppable fort. In a way they did too.
And no lie I didn't fall for Anora's whole "captured" trick in the game. And I wasn't even surprised when she turns on us at the landsmeet. I was just happy that I played as a Cousland and married Alistair, and in my mind a nice little evil grin of triumph of successfully out smarting all the nobles, Howe, Loghain, Anora.

"Sten's human half-brother" OMG XD I think I laughed too hard at that.
And whoa, nice twist on how Taliesen is introduced and how Zevran is feeling on the matter.

Airam is on the war path. Cant wait to see what the next chapter brings.

Dang Zev, you cut straight to business. Now I'm curious as to what Wynne's secret is... or maybe I technically should know it lol

Wasn't it wonderful how a battle brought corpses together? XD omg the sarcasm lol

And holy crap! I guess we all now know why Alistair was acting strange.

Ohhhh leliana has a deeper secret then just being a bard.

You're right lol it took a while but it was worth it. They finally kissed and it was one of those "awe, about time!" moments

Thank you!

"He should have gone to that meeting..." XD 3rd degree from the big sister lol

You did it! :D You really finished it, and it's not even December yet. :D
I loved this so much, I think it's a perfect ending. I especially love how Zev saw Air as a figure made of light, and Air saw Zev as a rising sun - they are each other's light.
The funeral was fun and touching at the same time, especially Alistair's speech.

And oh I LOVE Adino! You MUST bring him again in the sequel! You'll continue with Meet Cute now, right? And with Aira. And with CRS!

But epilogue first! :)

yaaaaayyyy!

good job, the army not putting up with ferelden's racist bullshit!

i was worried, too, about clouds and such. good thing the mages had it in hand. the surana clan! hah! ;D

congratulations on making it to the finish line. have some cake! or pie. or... pie-cake! (cake-pie?)
then get to work on your other works! ;D

plus... EPILOGUE!