I think it’s awesome. Later on though I think you should make her have an accident like Danny’s but not completely the same.

It starts a day before the accident

Please continue this story... I really love this.

Keep going

So this story started at the beginning or just before the beginning if the series

This is great!

This fanfic rocks!
Will You ever continue it?

You kept changing between third and first POV but otherwise good

It's good. The only issue I found was that you sometimes switch between first and third person at random. Other than that, though, it's good and I look forward to reading more.

Hey, I just want to tell you that I think this story is really good and still has a lot of potential. I hope you update it again at some point, but I can understand if other things have you occupied. I just wanted to tell you that I like your story.
Also, please check out my own Danny/Star story if you get a chance. It's called "Phantom's Satellite." I'd really appreciate some extra feedback.
Anyways, have a good one!

For some reason Julian infuriates me more than anything.

I've really been itching to read dannyxstar fics and I just love yours. Please update soon seeing as it's been quite a while since your last update

I saw this fanfiction and went meh. Then I clicked on it, began reading and couldn't stop until I hit this chapter.

This is purely and simply amazing. I love how it's practically a rewrite of the series, but in not as detailed a format , sometimes having omly a short reference and the entire story is laced with some wonderful originality. I love the changes and Star's characterization is beautiful. The way you've written her just fits into the story and theirs lives just perfectly.

I adore her friendship with Sam, and I could truly see this as an alternative universe with her friendship being included. I always felt like Sam needed a female character friend and the way her and Star interact just works flawlessly. I also enjoy how she doesn't know the secret yet and her slight awe over this mystery whitehaired boy. It's beautifully written how people kind of noticed Danny Phantom but yet are still kinda of "wtf was that" concerning him before Danny's fame really hit. Danny and Star's relationship is really portrayed well too. Star's brother is a good OC as well.

This, my friend, is a fantastic fanfiction. I cannot wait to see how this progresses.

Yo! This awesome story needs to be updated. Like now. Seriously, its really good.

I LOVE this story, PLEASE keep writing! And don't forget about The Ghostly Auror, I'm in love with that story, too. XD

And I have a question for you. Who is your favorite character from Danny Phantom? Just a random question I wanted to ask.

- SlytherinPrincess792