Reviews for Talk to me
mela16 chapter 1 . 4/4/2018
Wow, this was amazing!
melove167 chapter 1 . 7/26/2017
Holy Shit! I don't think I've read anything more perfect than this story, ever. I started reading on the bus and had to stop because I was getting waayy too emotional reading this in a very public setting. There were so many lines in this that got me straight in the heart..."It's obvious that with the morning, spontaneity is harder to reach and old doubts return with ease"..."If it is a memory, its not happening any more. It is over,"... and there's so much more but I would need to comb through and find again! I loved each realization you made Hermione face, from realizing that Ron would really die for her and to the memory one with Luna. I loved the relationship you developed with Fleur and Hermione and I loved that you made both Fleur and Luna tell Hermione that Ron was in love with her. It was nice. Your writing style is so good! The words you picked and the tension you built up was amazing and the ending scene was just the best cherry on top! Seriously. "make the walls shatter"... daamn!
HeRonLove chapter 1 . 1/14/2017
Awesome just awesome.
untiltheskyfallsdownonme chapter 1 . 4/1/2016
Oh my! this definitely one of my favorite shell cottage moments. I love everything in this story, every conversations especially their confession to each other. Thanks for writing this beautiful story
probablyahufflepuff chapter 1 . 7/5/2015
That was great! Ron & Hermione are obviously my favourite relationship from the books. But I also love any friendship moments between Hermione & Fleur and Hermione and Luna. Very different, but very unique and powerful women. Well done!
chavi chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
I love the heart to heart between r/hr...
U did well in this really.. You shouldn't stop writing..i mean you writes really good..
I enjoyed reading it..
Looking forward to more of your work :)
Canon Archives chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
That was really good. Do you know just how difficult it is to find a confessions story between these two that's actually good? This was really good! Honestly! :D
zhujian chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
The best Shell Cottage fiction ever I prefer stories that stick to the canon.
Zalini chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Absolutely wonderful! Beautifully written and so full of promise and the love they share. Amazing story! Loved it immensely.
GingerPygmy99 chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
fantastic !
F Maurice chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Very, very good. Ron and Hermione had to have this talk at some point and you touched on those basic emotions of guilt, fear and insecurity so well. Keep it up.
AnonymslyMe chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Damn. I don't like to swear online, and i also know some people are opposed to it. But if we read fanfiction, i believe we can stand a little swearing.

So, here goes. I mean, shit, that really was amazing. Sometimes, i couldn't let myself believe that Ron or Hermione would be that daring in the things they said to each other, but at the same time i believed it and I really wanted them to be like that. Everyone does a slightly different aspect of characters, and sometimes i feel like the way you have Ron and Hermione in this piece are braver than how they appear in the books, and the movies too. However, as this is completely a missing moment type story, I can see as how they might act that way too. We don't know how they act alone, because it's always told from a 3rd person with Harry's input.

There are so many little moments in this fanfic that i just love. I love how it just kept going and going and actually satisfied me. I go on fanfiction to get more, and I end up wanting more sometimes too, but this finally gave me enough, and still had me wanting to read more if it was there, but i didn't feel like I was missing a huge part of something afterwards. If that makes any sense whatsoever.

I apologize for rambling, and I hope you, or anyone else made sense of this or found something in here a point worth thinking about.
Orrangerange chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
As I was reading the story, I kept thinking "O ok she is going to end it right here" but it never ended, and that made me extremely happy. There was great buildup and the way you describe their interaction and the tension between them is fantastic. The last bit "We are going to make the walls shatter" had me going all ASDFASDFADFASDFADF in the fact that it was amazing.

So yea, another fantabulous story.

(hehe, hope I'm not annoying you with all these reviews)
Kelly123 chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
There is nobody like Ron to brush my tears away.

There is nobody like him to initiate them, either.

TOO CUTE! AND TRUE!
Jae Bee chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
perfect. i wish you'd write all their scenes in their pov
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