I liked how you did it from Sally's POV. But you said this is chapter 1... does this mean you'll write more?

I loved it. please make more chapters. I love them together.

i think its pure genius and that you should make another chapter

Wowowowow! You are absoulutly awesome at writing Sally and Jack in character! I'm hooked on this already! I only have on critique' put capitals on the title and summary. ;) it turns some people off of a story sometimes. :P But your a great author! It's awesomelly awesome! Please write another chapter? :P

:DDD! SO - COOL! :) it's nice the way you started at the end of the movie (: and I really think you should continue this!

I'm waiting for the next chapter (:

update soon, please?

I thought this was a good start could use a bit more story added to it but defiantly a job well done :) I look forward to chapter 2!