I really do adore this, honestly I do. Ive got you and this story on alert and favourite. But I do have some issues.
The plot is...interesting, in a sense. It got really draggy a lot in between specifically Chapter 4-6. And I think its because you have so many characters and a lot of scenes and changing POV's and its getting a bit disorienting. GrimmIchi is amazing, because I adore your Grimmjow and I adore your Ichigo but there's a problem there as well. For literally half the story Ichigo doesn't make an appearance and Grimm doesn't as well and their interactions might as well be nonexistent. You're voice, as in, your characters are good but I guess it's all gotten a bit clustered really.
Whenever I click onto a next chapter I find myself scrolling to see the GrimmIchi scenes and it's really bad because your other characters are good sometimes and I can't give them the attention it deserves.
All in all.
When I read your first chapter, I was immensely into it, entertained, excited, and ready to click onto the second chapter. But sometime during Chapter 2 you kind of lost me and Ive struggled to regain that joy I had on reading the first chapter ever since.
Every chapter, whilst written very well and amazingly and the plot is finally sorrrtof coming together or at least in my head, I just feel in general sort of irritated?
Ichi feels a little one dimensional and so does Grimm. But that's because we haven't gotten enough time with these characters.

I really do hope you update soon because no matter what I say and how I sound I still love this story and I want to see how it ends
Thankyou!

This is great. I hope you continue this.

Aaaaaaaaaah! Nnnnnooooooo! 'Ere is ta nex' ch?! Please continue! U r a great author!:)

Oh my god. Please. Please don't be done with this story. I know its been more than a year since you've updated... Sigh...

Ooh i can't wait for this mystery to unravel itself

Oh gawd... But at least they know he's missing. Shiro is going to be mad... Grimmjow too

Oh nooooooo! What's happened?

Oh gawd! Get there quick!
Now with Shiro in the mix shit is about to get real. I think... Ha ha ha
I'm really diggin' this story

No Ichigo!
And what the hell is Aizen doing there?

Dun dun dun! And more plot bunnies develop... This is so exciting

Awww is Starrk in love with Toshiro? Sounds like it :P

Yeah that's right! You don't fuck with Grimmjow and his partner without getting pay back.
Did this mean... Toshiro is... Dead?

Oh i love the imagery, how you've written it. Its pretty amazing :)
Nnoi was uh...pretty disturbing though heh

Oh damn. Very interesting, somewhat dark...but I honestly can't wait for more!

-hands over platter- Magic cookies for you!

I am absolutely addicted! Everything with this story just flows together so well, with such a unique plot and all the detail, it makes me so curious and excited for more. I really do like all the character background and interactions, the emotion, and of course the GrimmIchi as well as the Kurosaki brothers. :) Thank you so much for writing this, I can't wait til the next chapter!