:D I love it :3

AAAAAAAA hhhhh the ending was so cute oml I love it

This is my absolute favorite multi-chapter Jalph fanfic in the history of LOTF fandom. Just, I LOVE how in character they were for the most part (though of course just a little OOC for fluffiness, but I don't mind at all!) and I thought it was just heartwrenchingly adorable how worried Jack was for "us." So I was completely happy at the end! It's the perfect CLIFFY (though I wish there was more!), though I know nothing can last forever ! Anyway, thank you so so much for writing and completing this! I don't know what I would've done if it were incompleted

Also RIP Roger... I felt sad for the poor boy, even after all he did. It was sad how affected he was by his own actions.. Jack did the right thing for him though, as a friend.

this was too cute.

I am going to be honest when he said "Hey you" at the end I went into full tears. I loved this story!

*Sigh* Why must your Jack/Ralph stories be so utterly wonderful and sweet? Each one I've trad, I've loved to pieces. This one was no exception...it was brilliant. Your Jack just seemed so much more likable and cute. And you've got Ralph down to a tee. He was very much in character because he resisted Jack for so long. And even when he was with Jack, he still had doubts. Of course, the fluffiness between them was fun to read, too :)

And poor Roger. That kid had a lot of issues. He had multiple personality disorder, right? Or did his time on the island just get to him?

Loved the ending, by the way. Jack and Ralph found each other! I just wished there was more to it, you know? I'm a person that needs loose ends to be tied up. Perhaps a one-shot sequel if you feel like it?

As a small side note, there were some grammatical errors. You switched tenses a couple of times with 'has.' And there were a few missing commas. But none of those things affected the plot line, so no worries.

This last chapter always reminds me of a boy i used to like. We had a sorta relationship before we got separated. Its been three years since ive seen him and i havent liked anyone else like that for a while. I hope to find him one day, even if we just end up being friends. (2 ii's)
I love ur story, especially the ending.
Love,
Emile

Awesome.

GAH I LOVE YOU SO MUCH OKAY

I just about SCREAMED at the end of this story! I was so happy that after three years, they finally found each other again! WOO! I think I'll actually go outside right now just to scream. Very much, well done! I love your stories!

ahaha this is so funny... Love it! I hope you do more stories like this soon!

Omg I loved the ending! ) it rocked loved the story :3

Oh. My. Awesome! Love, love, super love the boys. And I nearly cried at the end, no joke. The coral island thing was creative, this story was great, the fluff was awesome, I totally loved this story! Sequal? ;)

mmmm girl that was soooooo good

Oh, I don't care if I already review twice, haha. I loved this! At the end of the chapter I was like "Awwwwww!" The whole thing about the forboding beast seems awesome, and a great way to keep up the story from being only romance. Keep up the good work!