Reviews for Paragraph 175
leylinjan chapter 4 . 3/1/2016
It's very unlikely that an SS officer could have emigrated to the US. They didn't like Germans much after the second world war, much less Nazis.
IlovesMesomeGlee chapter 8 . 3/15/2015
Goddamn! I still LOVE this story! :)

Rereading it again gives me all types of feelings :)

This will forever be one of favorite stories ever :)))
Just thought u should know :)
Paper Coffee Cup chapter 14 . 10/26/2014
OMG I love this story! I normally wouldn't comment until the end but I just wanted to say before I forgot that during the last chapter, I actually went looking to find out what the S.S.A.A. was. I figured that it PROBABLY wasn't the 'Sporting Shooters' Association of Australia', so I would just have to wait and see... Lol. But then I read that S.S.A.A. apparently stood for 'Same Sex Addicts Anonymous' and I was like WHYYYYY?!

But I do really like the concept of this story and how in a way, Kurt and Dave are facing the same issues that their grandfathers, Klaus and Nikolai did... and is it totally insensitive of me that I can't stop imagining Kurtofsky doing a little role play and Kurt totally making a Nazi Uniform his Bitch?

Well, I'm going to finish reading this now and I can't wait to read the rest and see how it ends.
Furrina chapter 7 . 8/4/2014
Of all the bloody things... It was an accident, Finn. The only time he didn't mean to hurt Kurt, he did. Poor guy.
umbrella0326 chapter 27 . 7/23/2014
Well conceived and wonderful story. I really enjoyed it.
umbrella0326 chapter 26 . 7/22/2014
Nice. Nice transition from bitter to healing. Good ol' strong Karofsky/Hummel and supportive Azimio. Nice.
umbrella0326 chapter 25 . 7/22/2014
Awesome reaction from Azimio. GREAT plot choice.
umbrella0326 chapter 24 . 7/22/2014
Everybody loves a protective Karofsky. Boy, you really show how much you love Kurtofsky in this chapter! (Psst - that's a good thing!)
umbrella0326 chapter 23 . 7/22/2014
I really like how you played with emotion in this chapter. It was wonderful. It was awful. It was passionate. It was horrifying. And yet, the reader doesn't feel jerked around.

And your descriptions of action are really good too - that's not easy to write either.
umbrella0326 chapter 22 . 7/22/2014
Whew - what an engrossing and passionate chapter! I've just noticed how many times I say "passionate" when reviewing your chapters. It's kinda funny, but a very accurate word.

You've nailed emotions and physical/sexual content really well. They're not easy to write. Again, well done.
umbrella0326 chapter 19 . 7/22/2014
A lot happens in this chapter. I like your Dave. And your Kurt. They both make mistakes and are willing to see beyond themselves. Nice touch. And I'm holding out hope for Azimio.
Guest chapter 18 . 7/22/2014
I like how honesty didn't seem to hurt so bad. Whether is was physical or emotional honesty, the boys care for each other in their own way.
umbrella0326 chapter 16 . 7/22/2014
Yikes...brutal read.
umbrella0326 chapter 15 . 7/22/2014
The ending really makes this mature-themed chapter work. You remind the reader that we're talking about teenage boys here and they're silly, embarrassed, excited, and scared.
Of course, that's usually a harbinger - so, I have a feeling the next chapter won't be so cheery. Nicely done.
umbrella0326 chapter 14 . 7/21/2014
Wow. Just...wow. What a passionate chapter. You've nailed how exciting being your TRUE self can really be. Nicely done.
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