Looks like something from Hans Von Hozel.

Same old crap just a different package. Been done so many times that refuse pile is getting pretty high with this same b/s plot device.

Doormat-kun, er Naruto will wait like a good loyal pathetic dog and take whatever sloppy seconds Sakura will give him after she's done with Sasuke and have a big smile like the idiot you've already portrayed him as.

Also spell check wouldn't have hurt and doesn't look promising since this was a only a handful of words.

ok the intro would've been better had you made it with sakura leaving with sasuke and naruto finding out after shes gone and leaving him heartbroken because 1 it wouldve gotten people to feel naruto-kun's pain and 2 it wouldve been more epic but not a bad stepping stone