Great story

very good! CONTINUE!

Hurry and update it! The waiting is unbearable!

Love your story! Please update soon!

Will there be any more chapters? I want to see some more details about Leslie and Serge. Don't forget Alf and Adele.

OMG!, OMG!, OMG! 3 I LOVE IT! you are so awesome at writing up this fanfiction. Keep writing up, PLEASE! thank you for chapter 9!

One more thing; try to see if you can put snippets of AlfxAdele, WeissxCarlisle, and/or NikoxFreya. Those pairings definitely work with the game

Yay, Allwise maze RULZ. I hope weiss and alf'll be in it too (especially weiss, just so l'arc can get some answers from him). Also, how different will the Allwise thing go? You shoul have him defeated, then turn him into a rogress with the "Logos of Awareness" (Howl of Awareness" in his feldragon form) and call it something like "Awaring Strike"

WOW! So they got just in time to see Serge " making a move" on Leslie! Now that is awkward!LOL!

KYAAAAAAHHH! Where is Adele! And Niko! They're my FAVORITE CHARACTERS!

Do they have to live there forever? No! Let them live! At least Adele and Niko! Their lives ended when they were really young! They deserve to live the years they couldn't have! Is Alf going to be there? With Adele? Niko founded General Freya? Is L'Arc going to see her mother, again?

OH! PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Great Story! PLEASE keep writing this! I want to see what happens furthur!

Please, do tell!

I can't take it anymore! Is Adele, Niko and Dynos going to revive, AS IT WAS PROMISED IN ALLWISE MAZE?

Or are you're not going to give mention to AllWise, at all?

I love your story, but I want to see Cecille happy... With his brother, again... - starts crying like a little girl-

Or Adele, finally accepting not to be meant to be with L'Arc and finding true love in a clueless Niko... OR AT LEAST A MENTION OF THEM! - kneels infront of author begging for mercy-

I love this story, that is why I want to see everyone happy...

(And even if i cry that doesn't mean i'm not a guy, ok!)

Nice little twist there. Also, are there gonna be any references to allwise, or the three optional rogress at all?

P.S. thanks for having this all resolved(cause like I mentioned before, 1 adele was enough, and I think everyone out there can agree with me)

awwwww it's over D: i really can't wait for more xD I'm getting so into your alternative ending X3

Yay! I liked it keep going, but remember the extra dungeon, when they say that Dynos, Niko and Adele had a chance to exist in the future? Could you... Could you please revive them? At least Niko, he was a great guy -sniff- And I would love to know he was able to live once again thanks to Esas Allwise Maze (you know the place where all memories and escense of a person lives?) I mean, please?

It's a shame what happened to Rastan, and are you going to turn Ryfia into another Adele? Please don't do that. One was enough trouble in the game.

If you need material for the story, there's(*SPOILER ALERT*) Koudoan, Mashgar, Allul, and Allwise for ya(spoiler ends)