Great story, Im looking forward to the next chapter ;) Im quite dissapointed that Senas not with Hiruma though ;/ but with the promise of angsty relationship im almost glad hes not. Will he be with Juumonji I wonder. Or Agon? (his capacity for angst is unparalleled so you will have your work cut out for you) There is one thing ive been wondering about for a while since many people said that ES21 is racist/sexist but to tell the truth Ive read the manga twice, and not once did I thing any of that. Could somebody please explain it to me? Give me some examples? Not because I think you're wrong but to prove tto myself that im not a dense ignorat person, thanks :)

I know that's little chance you'd be updating this story but I still have to try! I've been reading the eyeshield 21 manga again recently and of course went on to read the fanfic again. This is still one of my favourites!

Was the romantic 'angst' going to be HiruMamo or did you ever plan to have Sena paired with anyone in this fic?

love the story. Its impossible to find good eyeshield stories so that makes yours all the more impressive. The plot is gold, it really showcases Senas attitude towards adversity, something a lot of people forget to include. I really look forward towards reading more, thank you.

omg! love this! update!

OH GOD, I LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOU! YOU'RE THE BEST! I WANT MORE OF YOUR MASTERPIECE!

а small remark: mamo-nee's name is mamori and surname is anezaki.. so for hiruma to call her by her name would mean to call her mamori-chan, and he is not 'shy boy' nearly enough to call her politely by her surname!

oh and, WOULD YOU HELP ME TO FIND STORIES WITH THE IDEA OF IMMOBILIZED AND TIRELESSLY RECOVERING SENA? I BEG YOU! *dogeza*

You made my day so mych better with this story! :D I loved this chapter.

I'm interested in your E21 data, if you could tell me where you found it...

Wow, an update ! And such an interesting development! I like the way you made Mamori - concerned but not as protective as she used to be. And WHY did I have this feeling Hiruma was going to come in as soon as I read 'expensive' ?

Interesting so far, but the characters aren't quite in character. I have to say, though, that the concept of a crippled Sena is so corny I can't believe no one thought of it before you.

How come Suzuna's not in the story? You only mentioned her as being an Enma cheerleader...

Are you going to touch on the mystery of the sniper, or is it just going to be left alone as a spent plot device?

...I agree with you about the wiki being empty.

Hello! I had already added this story to my alerts (and favorites... I think... I don't remember! o_o), but didn't review. Hehehe... yes.

Anyway! I absolutely loved the way you write! Your diction is really good, and you captured Sena's (and everyone else's, for that matter) perfectly. It almost made me depressed seeing Sena's condition. D: But good thing it isn't *that* bad... right?

I really do hope Sena will be able to walk later in the story. )'

Keep the good work!

:) How exciting! Sena won second place, which is better than last! Ha ha. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hooray! He is motivated again! But I do have one question, how long are you saying it's been? Because, and I have no idea, but if it had only been a few months wouldn't his legs still have the muscle he had? And who will the couples be? :) Can't wait for more!

Angsty romance? Good lord! I'll still be looking forward to seeing more of this though. Sena's struggles here are quite a contrast to his struggles on the football field, in some ways.

I can't wait for more! This is really one of the most interesting stories I've seen for this series. Great job!

Wow. This story is very sad! But I like it, very interesting.