l.o.v.e.d. i.t. seriously. definitely ootb complete percabeth stories out there, take time and carry on with your life, but if you feel like it, write percabeth again. will be waiting for your next percabeth 3.

This fanfic was AMAZING! It made me squeal with delight and contentment.

I have literally read hundreds of percabeth fanfics on soooo many sites but I always come back to this one. IT IS SO AMAZING AND THE PLOT AND THE CHARACTERS ARE WRITTEN SO WELL. I LOVE IT. Also it's so nice how you didnt just stop once they got together. AMAZING. Congratulations.

I have read millions of percabeth fabrics but I always come back to this one. It is amazing! Congrats on such a great job, I honestly love it.

K as soon as you mentioned rachel and luke i quit reading this story

dude, really this is the best percabeth I have ever read. when I read about Annabeth leaving for NYC I literally cried man. I am telling you man, THIS IS THE BEST PERCABETH D

This is my Favorite chapter! Why don’t you like it? It’s Puuurfect! ️️️

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This story was Amazing!

Awesome! It was very romantic. I like how you did the same with th beggining and end, Annabeth wants to see Percy’s reaction. Loved it!

Goodie percabeth all the way!

Good but some typos

Hey it's percabethlife2025, I love the story I'm writing one myself but I don't know how to add it on. I'm only 11 but I'm addicted to Percy Jackson and I've read all the books and I need help so if you're willing to help me, I'd like it. Please help me by telling me some ideas and telling me how to post it on . Please I really trust you.

Pizza in Italy is nothing like pizza for the United States. The crust is thinner, and they use olive oil instead of whatever people use here. Most of all, though, they don't have plain cheese or pepperoni pizza - the most generic pizzas are the Margherita (tomatoes, mozzarella, and basil) and the solely tomato sauce-garlic pizza (I've seen it been called marinara, Napoli, and tomato before, so I don't know the actual name), and I've never even seen pepperoni in Italy before- there's salami, and you can find the Spanish chorizo in grocery stores, but I don't remember seeing pepperoni anywhere. Critiquing the story itself, I actually liked it more than I thought I would, but I don't know why authors insist on writing PJ as being so arrogant and whiny (however, I will also state that it has been a while since I last read the books, so I could just be forgetting about Canon and attaching my own labels). There's nothing majorly wrong with the grammar or spelling, as far as I can tell, so kudos to you!
-LiMediterra