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Oh bless! I got air worried Bella left

I have mixed bag for you. As a couple, nice banter and the attraction on his part was palpable. Edward's character was charming and gruff at the same time, which I like, but Bella's character was hard to connect with. She mostly just seemed young and manipulated, making it hard to see what attracted her to him so fiercely. The last 3 chapters finally shed some light on her, so thank you. James didn't seem to go anywhere and the back and forth sequence was jarring. Loved Carlisle and Emmett and the fight with Riley which gave Edward background and substance. Overall I liked this story, thanks for sharing.

Very well written story,thumbs up !

a whole chapter about his number...we were on the cusp of finding out how nasty he is and then you don't even fucking tell us? this is bullshit!

this is kinda hard to follow. and you've given the reader NOTHING to like either main characters. I don't get it

He is pathetic. Forget her!

Hello just reading this great story for the umpteeth time. Hope you're well. Alchemilla

I think they're both assholes.

Of course his drivers an asian *rolls eyes* gotta love white stereotypes

That was a more satisfying ending. Thank you.

Interesting background...

I assume they're married?

Thank you for putting our minds at ease so quickly & completely.

Crap!