THIS IS SO SAD OH MY GOSH but also very different and interesting and I like it. A different take on how their relationship could turn out.

OH BECK WHY.

Why won't she just tell him she loves him ! So frustrating ! But update soon !

Yeah, that was a little weird. But I liked it all the same (:

I think she should leave Danny and run away with Beck (: They can go to Acapoco! ...If I spelt that right o:

u should continue writing angst cuz ur like a gud angst writer

she could hv said i luv u but nah u knw cuz tht wud fall under some sappy stuff but anyway gud angst story Dramatic Starlet Keep it up

This was absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking and just simply wonderful. And I loved what you did with the second person and the fucked up Beck and everything was just fabulous.

Beautiful job. :)

I think this is good, however I feel as though Tori is a little OOC, she is kinda acting like jade in this short, but whatever. It was still written nicely.

omg I really liked this story. It kind of irked me that it ended so abruptly but I really really liked so I hope there is more to it.!

That was really good

IT'S ANGST WITH LURVE AT THE END. I enjoy this quite a bit, there needs to be more good Bori in the world and god just write more please. I am going to stalk you now. :D

I really can feel the desperation of Beck and Tori in this. There's a lot of emotion and that's why I loved it. Excellent job!

OH MY GOD. MY POOR TORIBECK SHIPPY HEART. KATIE LYNN HOW COULD YOU EVEN. THIS IS SO DEPRESSING. AND BEAUTIFUL AS HELL, BUT IT'S STILL DEPRESSING. D:

dfsjlkdsjkskl the last section. total, utter flawlessness and perfection and omg please teach me your ways o great one.

fhkldfjdskl favoriting and sorry my review sucks. ilu dearie.