WOW!

So cute! :D 3 it

This was a really good fic! I really liked it!

One thing though that maybe not many people know and I feel a little rude pointing it out, Ciel is in actuality a girls name anyway! It's Latin and means heavenly or from the heavens!

Before you or anyone else says it, yes I'm fully aware that Ciel in the manga/anime is a boy, but like I said I looked it up a while ago and his name is actually female!

Still a good fic though!

Ciel was a bit wierd at the beginning, but the lemon was good

I love this story! its soo cute!

I love it! You should make it into a story It would be amazing!

Ok, first off let me say that I've never even read/watched Black Butler. I found your story on the favorites list of someone who had favorited one of my stories (sorry if that sounds convoluted) and it sounded really interesting, so I read it. Now let me say WOW! I am so glad I read your story. It is so good, romantic and sweet and HOT and funny (I laughed so hard when you said Sebastian was part horse) and wonderfully well-written. I enjoyed it immensely. Great job!

I totally thought I was going to hate having Ceil turned into a girl but if I just read the story... wow. This was awesome! You kept with them for so long and then when their personalities changed it still felt so... real. Thank you for your words.

It is pretty good. You could do with some separating between scenes, but it was really good.

Rare to read a well written story where Ciel is the female, but a pretty common name for the female version. (I am still surprise people don't show much creativity when it comes to that)

Your grammar was pretty good, and so was the spelling. However might I point out Ms. Mrs. 'Mrs' shows the person is married. Ciel(a) is not as of yet so the correct term would be 'Ms' Ms. Phantomhive. See much better.

Yes the characters were a bit OOC, which is common so really there isn't much to push. Other than I don't think Ciel would act so girlie even if he were a girl.

Kuroshitsuji is the much perferd name in this fandom than Black Butler. Black Butler brings a bitter taste to the mouth because of the horrible dubbing and the awful translations Yen Press did (though Yen Press didn't change much of the lines like the 'waste of money' dub did). This is just a side note, you can ignore this.

Other than that it was pretty good and going to my favorites. Your dialogue fit well for this story, and though your descritpion lacked a bit, and the lemon felt a tad bit machenic.. It was good.

Its cute

I love u for making this! *w*

It was hot n nicely done. It is VERY hard to find fics seb x female ciel doing M-rated stuff. T.T i hope u'll make another or a sequel?

I love u for making this! *w*

It was hot n nicely done. It is VERY hard to find fics seb x female ciel doing M-rated stuff. T.T i hope u'll make another or a sequel?