Great so far, nice idea. I loved the way you described Izaya.

Please update! -insert pleading face- I can't wait to see what'll happen next.

I think this is completely awesome so far. I was happy sad the whole time. But if doesn't look like your writing anymore. So I think I will go curl up in a ball somewhere and cry for lack of endings.

Hm. I've seen this story a few times, but haven't gotten around to reading it until now. This is amazing so far. I hope you continue it when you have the chance.

Are you still writing this? I really like it!

Poor Izaya. I feel for him. I'm glad Shizuo's trying to help him out and possibly befriend him.

I really love all your work. xD
I can't wait to see how this story will turn out. I love how there seems to be a lot going on, even though the plotline isn't all that complicated (or so it seems). You really have a talent for writing.

((Sorry for spamming you with reviews, lol.))

Really interesting o_o

oooh please continue this! its so good haha poor shizuo, i want him to end up saving izaya

dont stop please must have shizaya soon hahaha

While the plot is very well-formed and interesting, your writing is what stands out. Your sentences express what you want to say very clearly, the story is very fluent and it also has the dark aura all angst-readers are looking for. Please do continue as I'm very curious about what happens next. :)

very interesting! another chapter please! c:

This looks really interesting! I hope you continue :)

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! There is a lot of potential to this n i can juz see all the heart warming scenes u can put into this:) Honestly, awesome foundation here...juz gotta build a plot eith lots of angst, insecurities, yadah yadah:DDD Definitely a dark fic~

U are such an aspiring author! Go write a book, and i'll make sure to be the first one to buy it.

Because,seriously dude,it's mind blowing O

Update soon~

I'll wait foreevaaaah if i have to

Oh my goodness, I need this angst in my life! D8