Awesome!

omg i loved this so sweet cloud is! clotifa forever

Oh this was so beautiful! I love serendipitous meetings, and this was the perfect setting. Cloud and Tifa were so perfect from her falling asleep on his shoulder to him causally mentioning he doesn't have a girlfriend to offering ot drive her home! This was a perfect one shot. Fav

good story. but just so you know in the future, if you don't know already. Tifa and Cloud grew up together, they have known each other their whole lives. I don't know if you knew that, but there it is.

This was a refreshing look at a beginning romance. It's nice to see someone that was able to transition the characters from their world into a more modern world. I thought you did a wonderful job of that and kept a well written story.

My only real criticism comes in that I got confused with one part. At the beginning you told us that Tifa lived in Edge but by the end she was in Sector 7 of Midgar. I know it's difficult sometimes to keep things straight or that more often then not we decide later that on to change something and forget to fix the earlier portions that mention it. I recently noticed that I had a character that changed names three times in one chapter. Griffin, Grier, Gregoir... lol

Anyways, wonderful story. I'll be looking for more from you.

very awesome ne. I like fiction shots like these ne. working on the premise of possibility that is within a reality that is beleivable. Budding romance like that is something people over look going straight to the "i love yous" and all. unlike this which starts with the simple hello that can lead into the budding relationship that will have an inexplicable amount of beginnings that are unforseen that will no doubt strengthen the relationship and the love that will grow more and more. This story made my Valentine's day good thats for sure, thank you. Even though i spend it with no one close to me, this story gives me hope for something in the future ne

This was... really good. The romance in the ending almost got a little bit too fluffy for my tastes (especially if we're talking about adults), but it was okay. I think you did great justice of telling the story through Tifa's eyes, and you did a really nice take on the economy and society of Midgar. Basically I love how you took (almost all) the FF7 cast and turned them into ordinary humans while hinting bits and pieces of canon like the punch in the face dream. I'd say that the 'logo' element might not have been neede here, and it was a bit distracting, but that's really all I have to say in terms of concrit. A very well written piece.

-Milly