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ART! THIS IS ART!

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God now I need to write my own Brolin. XDDDD

This is amazing. I would love for there to be a second chapter about the co-actors walking into Colin's room and seeing them naked and curled up together XD That would be truly epic

a bit awkward how you didn't mention bradley's dad at all afterwards but i guess its understandable since it's a one-shot and a short one at that but it would have been nice to hear what happened and how colin helps bradley deal with it

otherwise, cute story :)

great story..first one i've read as Colin and Bradley. the story was well thought out and rather believable ;) there are only two things i would change in your story 1)when they are undressing you forgot to mention bradley was pushed onto the bed..(the sex fairies didn't just move him there 'ya know) and 2) this all happened because the felllow cast was worried about him..you should have shown an afterwords where they were relieved they FINALLY got together...and what about the whole "Bradley's parents died" thing...did that 'lil misunderstanding just get tottaly ignored? haha sorry if i sound harsh just trying to help YOU inprove. XD

I've been looking eveywhere for this kind of FF, thank you!

Well done, it was really good

awww wjust awwww i loved this sooo mcuh great job

love the sex! absolutely fantastic! but a bit too rushed after his dad's death - wish it was a sweet buildup! but loved it none the less!

I like the idea of this plot and I don't want to rain on your parade, but it might be better posted on a different site - has a long-standing rule (in the Guidelines which you have to agree to before you're allowed to post) that you cannot post "Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc."

Don't worry though, there are plenty of Real Person Fiction communities out there that would be happy to have this story, including in the Merlin fandom (merlinrpf and bradleycolin spring to mind on the LiveJournal side of things)!