very nice but can do better

you should do the next chapter please

this is definitely not a k rating

its almost an m rating

using words like sensuously for a fiction with 9 or ten year olds is definitely a no go

this story is disturbingly written

dont tell me you imaging children doing stuff like that

disgusting

Nice! I loved this!

Nice one-shot!

Goten and Trunks are adorable! I like how you made them had tails (I always wounded why they don't hoave tails in anime...). My new fav couple is here! :)

I wanna see the sequel with the awkwardness when they are older.

The tails are a nice touch; I hope they be in the sequel too.

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this story is so pretty *.* I love it! Goten and Trunks are so cool I'm going to read the sequel:) This story goes to favourites;)

Hey! let me tell you something, sweetheart, I actually don't speak english and I think that I'm not good at reading or even writting it (as you can see, lols) for that reason, I never read stories in english, but dear, THIS awesome and absolutely cute OneShoot deserves it. Trunks/Goten its one of my favorite couples of DBZ, and also if the romance between them happens when they are children and MORE if Trunks behaviour is possesive and so...awwwn! So, yep, I think you are the best thing ever and I wish you cotinue writting about them. Srsly, the "husband and wife" fight was gorgeous, i love it.

Thats is, sorry for my poor review, you know, my english sucks xDDD

Instead, I love everything about this story, goes to favorites dear.

Kisses and continue doing this awesome things.

Li~.

Lovely! I loved everything about the story. So innocent but romantic at the same time. Of course I love Truten )

I'm waiting for the sequel!

Aww, so cute! I love that Trunks basically jumped all over the opportunity to mark Goten as his. This is the only pairing I like from this anime; but unfortunately there are a lot of well-written ones out there (or they have Trunks as the uke which I can not envision under any circumstances). I think you hit the perfect balance in their relationship! Looking forward to a sequel!

XD ZOMG SO CUTE! I think you should make it rated T but ZOMG SO CUTE! XDXDXDXD Goten and trunks are my favorite... I can't wait to read the sequel!

''Lustful eyes''? ''Turned on''?

They're nine years old! :O

You do have to pick the right age, dude. ;)

Its cute and fluffy

This is ADORABLE but at the same time totally hot! I love it! Such a cute couple! And really liked the whole experimenting thing.

this is just perfect excellent story is so kawaii i love it