hey amigo!
I'm still waiting for you to continue the story, it seriously has potential. I hope you come back and continue the story.
De paisa a paisa por favor continúa escribiendo, la escena de pelea de Danzo estuvo buenísima, nítida a todo lo que da, solo me puedo imaginar las peleas que podrías escribir en un futuro!
Espero que estés bien y vuelvas! En verdad tienes una buena historia y merece que la continúes.

This story...
It's context speaks of a potential I am seeking among the rough. Will a measure of skill; this story could raise its vitality to rival that of a true diamond.

The content:context ratio suggests your quality was a cut above, and your writing style is a healthy one...even after all this time. If you were to extrapolate the resolve of this story and revitalize it; I would be eager to see what you might inspire.

A dormant fanfiction is still far from desperation.

that was good keep the chapters coming

Go

Interesting, I hope Sakura and Ino get their friendship rebuilt! And I LOVE how Ino is attracted to Naruto and Sakura thinks she's attracted to Sasuke! LOL

you made Naruto a shadow clone spammer even though he was trained from seven years old? yea lost interest

Please continue this story. It is really good.

Yo mexican dude please do an update on this story

that was good loved it please update soon

Sucks to see that this was discontinued. There isn't really a serious relationship development since it cuts off so soon, but it's a cute/interesting read if you have some time to spare.

Great story so far. Are you still gonna keep writing it?

finally got to read this...honestly hope you update soon.

Sad to see such a well-written story being abandoned. The fight scene with Danzo was terrific, I was hoping to see more. Maybe this review will motivate you to write at least 30 more chapters!

good

Nice fanfic can you contine it please it is very good. I posted near enough the same think on every chapter because i really want you to continue it