Write more! I was in school reading it and groaned when I come to the end. I need more.

So how about those last chapters, eh?

Yes. Love it. Need more. Now. Please? I will love you forever.

Oh man! This story is absolutely fantastic! I read everything you have so far in one sitting and I cannot wait to read more! I hope you update soon! I have to know what happens next!

really enjoying this

cant wait for more

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more chapters please.

Haruka Saito.

I think it's a great concept and the story's moving along nicely. I especially liked Jim's monologue. Maybe in the future you could get a beta to look your writing over? The missing commas get a little distracting sometimes. Cheers :)

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I like how you did mummy holmes

I did like how you decided to portray Sherlock's mom. I think it was a bit unconventional, but I don't think she's got a big enough presence to really notice how she's that different. :D Good job, keep going, and believe in your story. :)

I don't know how I missed chapter 10 but I just caught up on both and they were great. Thank goodness they're both ok and have admitted they like each other. Sherlock's mom was a surprise. I like this version of Sherlock's mom and brother. It'll be interesting to see how the meeting with John's mom and sister go. Hope you can update soon.

okay, I feel kind of dorky for reviewing twice within 5 minutes, but you asked for spelling errors to be pointed out to you. By the ways, this is extremely strange. I'm kind of a lurker, and don't even review the majority of the stories I read. Now, twice in two chapters? Strange... Anyway, it wasn't a spelling error, just an akward sentence. When Moriarty says this: "We all know that it is highly unlikely that we could find someone to love our little Sherlock, the poor little unloved child." you used the word 'love' twice in the same sentence. Well, not really, you used 'love' and 'unloved' but still.

I'm still liking the story, and I promise to stop cluttering up your inbox now!

Wow! This is a really good start to what looks like an interesting fic, especially for a first time author! I didn't notice any spelling errors, but I'm glad you care about them! (authors that think they're above spell check are my pet peeves). I couldn't really picture young John, but young Sherlock came to me right away! Of course, I spend a good deal more time thinking about Sherlock than John... At any rate, I hope the next few chapters are as good as this one!

Muahaha, you think she'll be surprised? Really, I think it to be more of an incoming heart attack! hihihi, So do we get a smooth meet-the-family for John? or are we to anticipate some trouble and heartache? lol, can't wait to see how this develops! Great job in finishing this chapter! Keep goin my darling!

1: good night, i'm

2:sooooooo good! I love it!

3: Please wright more!