Reviews for Working Through the Kinks |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was great! The last one though was weird and just felt... Wrong to me, sorry. The others were super hot though- the one with the chains, oh my gosh, wow -and this was nicely written too. Great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() WILL? Other than that, nice piece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was good until they had Will stay. I didn't like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. Decently authentic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... just... wow. That was hot. *drools* |
![]() ![]() ![]() So hot! lol Awesome job! :) |
![]() ![]() I would seriously love to see a side story, with the FULL version of the Robber kink. I think it would just be sooo hot! Pleeeeease? |
![]() ![]() ![]() nope i couldnt read that last one MESSED UP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK- my input: Hmm.. Well, for starters- not a fan of the feet kink. But the popcicle and the spanking? TOTALLY sofuckinghot! the collar had me rubbing my throat, but it was mm mm good too. the ski mask chasing around the apartment thing? Um.. anyways, overall, I LOVED it. And seriously, Kurts fantasy? Holyfuckingohmyglee NICE! Except..who it was with. Now, certainly dont get me wrong, I LOVE will shuester- he's frickin hot- but i was oh SO hoping Puck would get to bone Kurt! Seriously. Altogether? Amazing! Good- no. Fantastic job:3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kinky ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMGlee I loved this so much. You should totally expand the fantasy rape/robber scenario I would love to hear the dialog for that. I can just imagine Blaine trying not to smile at Kurt's sarcasim. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked that the further the story continued the more intense the kinks got and the timeline of the boys expanded. Not a fan of the foot kink though, but maybe that's just me. I did enjoy the pool senario. I would read an expansion on that story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good God! That was all kinds of hot. I'm going to have to spend at least an hour in a bathtub full of ice to cool down after that. Holy hell. Wonderful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Some of it was REALLY good, but then some was too kinky for me. Keep writing and I will try and look past the "Daddys" you through in there. No disrepect intended, you are actually a fantastic writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the daddy discipline and how Blaine was so submissive. Do you think you could make a whole story about that? |