Well I was confused by the story from what I had seen from the other story that this was the completed form of.

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Great, epic, sad, sweet, and hopeful all those feelings were ignited in me while reading this. Thank you.

God, every time I read this, it's just as awesome and emotional as the first time i read it. It's not bogged down by tremendous amounts of emotion, and unlike most stories where Naruto winds up broken in a such a way, there seems to be a feeling of hope at the end. The amount of emotion is just right, I feel, and it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy every time I read this. Thank you for this great piece of work.

You know, I always loved your works. Read most if not all of your books and still keep up to date with them.
That is why when I noticed I never read this before, I was understandably shocked! But now? I am so happy that I found this, it is such a beautiful ending. Honestly, I would expect this to come out of a professional novel or movie, that took years to make.
I love your stories! Please, do keep writing!

When you see the void, you already lost your soul. Now gtfo.

The Souless Void.

Hey, this was quite amazing in all reality. The effects all of the events had on me were astounding. My stomach clenched, my brain turned, and tear rose. Yet, you managed to make me enjoy the ending in a full view, from love to life, and even though I'm not a huge supporter of love in a Naruto story, the marriage between Sasuke and Sakura actually felt like it was normal. So, thank you for writing this, and I have no words to criticize you with, good luck with other works.

The name being crossed out means he's still alive? Sorry for the dumb question. I liked this ending, it wasn't as sad I was afraid it would be. I do wonder what happened with Mei, though.

Holy shit, that was awesome. it leaves alot to the imagination of what happens between the two, but at the same time it brings alot of closure to the story. it's all in all, and amazing piece of writing, even by itself without a story attached.

I liked the fanfic. Are you going to make a naruto x kyuubi fanfic?

I think this works as a great one-shot

I would have loved this to be the ending. Fantastic way to end it.

Boom. That was one of the best endings I've read in Naruto fanfic. The whole chase through time and his hyper-drive mind boggles my own mind. I've never read anything quite like it, originality points there. It's poetic really, the price Naruto had to pay to stop Madara. And I love it, it's got the mark of a great story: It's good enough to make me want more but at the same time realizing that it's the best end I could hope for. You managed that in a couple thousand words, kudos to you sir.

That's nice a bit tragic but a good way to closure :D

This was a great one-shot after reading your A/N i went and listened to the song it is kind of sad

Excellent work, please, keep it up :D