Reviews for Mario Mario and the Hylian Stone |
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![]() ![]() Is dark pit going to be gilderoy Lockhart in the second book? Or maybe falco? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I spy a chuggaaconroy reference |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soooooooo...Luigi's the bad guy? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You put in chuck Norris. You have my respect gamer4! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not Dedede?! Geez, you really set is up for a plot twist, didn't you?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for making this, I liked everything that you have done in the story, especially the small stuff like the flavor of the candy Master Hand eats. I loved that you didn't make the ending predictable to anyone who has read the book or seen the movie, and I was especially fond of the characters you chose to take place of the various Harry Potter character. This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read and I know that I will enjoy the rest of the books you write about. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved that you used Captain Falcon's catchphrase in the conversation with Mario. "and you'll have to SHOW ME YOUR MOVES." |
![]() ![]() ![]() The first chapter has already got me hooked. I have read all of the harry potter books and I think this will be a fine retelling of the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks! I made a fanfic inspired by this, Mario Mario and the Pikmanian Stone, but I gave you credit. Best fanfic I've read ever! Good job. Go Nintendo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job hiding Twisted Lane location. On a score of 1 to 10, i give it an 11... Or a 3.14159... |
![]() ![]() ![]() EPIC! You are a GREAT author... Too bad both of those are trademarked... Oh, and I got an idea. In the series of unfortunate events, there is a man named MONTGOMERY MONTGOMERY and people teased like, "How are you how are you, Montgomery Montgomery?"" Repeats intended. Use the same joke for Mario Mario... Draco Malfoy of this series maybe? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you don't think I'm crazy or something, but I'm catchig a lot of Starkid references... C: |
![]() ![]() Of course, Calvin's dad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD As I reread this, I saw SO MANY FUNNY THINGS! In another castle Foreshadowing Do a barrel Roll Halberd CHUCK NORRIS Ano lisa no more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Lily here! Love the story, but the "Fat Lady" should maybe be wearing a teal dress instead of a pink one. Just 'cause she's Rosalina and everything. But of course, I will always trust the author. Bye! |