Reviews for Forgiven
naomis8329 chapter 6 . 5/26/2011
A truly beautiful story full of love, forgiveness and compassion. I do hope that Teagan and "Levyn" meet up again after the blight and that they can have some sort of life together. After all they met and loved and still do.

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece of writing.

Take care

Naomi
mille libri chapter 5 . 3/7/2011
Very sweet of Teagan to have Jowan let go. Awfully selfless of him, though, just when he'd begun to think of Jowan as his lover ...
mille libri chapter 4 . 3/7/2011
The relationship is growing very believably, as the two of them begin to learn about each other.
mille libri chapter 3 . 3/6/2011
Jowan's personality comes through so clearly here. You paint him with sympathy and understanding.
Eva Galana chapter 6 . 3/5/2011
Ah, nice ending, Nithu. 'Course, I was hoping for a reunion, but, maybe that's something further down the line...
YoshisSupport chapter 6 . 3/5/2011
aw :] they may see each other one day :d

that was a fun read hehehe

nice to get some action in there while waiting for alistair ferghal action too lol
Kelcat chapter 6 . 3/4/2011
Lovely ending! And the hopeless romantic in me hopes that they do wind up reuniting some day :)
Kelcat chapter 5 . 3/4/2011
Ah, Teagan's just an old softy really. Very, very sweet!
CielMeillure chapter 6 . 3/4/2011
Wow. I loved this story. It was so good. Sucks that it was short,bit it was wonderful
WellspringCD chapter 6 . 3/4/2011
See? SEE? I TOTALLY told you so. :D
lisakodysam chapter 6 . 3/4/2011
A perfect end to a beautifully-written, painstakingly detailed and thought-provoking story. And thank you for giving Jowan so much depth (quite a feat in 5 chapters) that you've turned him from a character I always found vaguely irritating to someone I care about.

"I don't know if you will ever truly understand, but I finally feel more than what I was and that is something I can never repay." said it all :-)

I've read your other reviews and I'm with Shakespira - WE WANT A SEQUEL!
Enaid Aderyn chapter 6 . 3/4/2011
*sniffle* :)
Jenna53 chapter 6 . 3/4/2011
This was a great story. Very hot, very touching. Thanks.
mamblymoo chapter 6 . 3/4/2011
Nithu - This was a great story. Thank you.
Shakespira chapter 6 . 3/4/2011
Oh, Nithu, this is perfect. Just perfect. I hope that a sequel may someday be forthcoming, especially since it's Levyn's greatest wish to be able to see Teagan again. That line, knowing how much it meant to Jowan to be able to actually see his lover, just made me cry.

Beautiful, brilliant story.
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