Love this story. Sad you never finished.
I think it should have ended with Cody finding Heather at a hospital. She explain herself to him and they make up.

Leave Out All The Rest by Linkin Park.

Ouch things are definitly not going well for Cody and Heather. I was right in suspecting that Heather was simply too ashamed of what she was doing to tell Cody, and sent him that email because she figured he'd want nothing to do with her if he knew what she was doing. Now then in regards to the ending, I'm personally hoping for a happy ending. You know where Cody and Heather are back together, and the future is looking bright. So hopefully that's what others also want to see. I'm still kinda waiting to see how Cody and Heather will meet, could prove entertaining. Oh and excellent job with the characters actions/emotions. Very appropriate considering their situations. Anyway keep up the excellent work.

InuGhost

this is so sad. they all deserve better lives than this. I hope C&H can find each other, be together, and also get better futures in the end

Ooh... tough call, Trent. And Cody couldn't find Heather... Another tough call. :( And Heather's a hooker? Even tougher! Update soon!

I apologise for not reviewing earlier. It's a bad habit of mine but I am really liking this story.

About this chapter, I really feel for all 3 of them, especially Cody who's just so lovestruck. I also liked how we see more of Heather's current lifestyle and it's a pretty deppressing one IMO. I can't wait for the next chapter and hopefully Cody and Heather will finally meet or at least know Heather's full reasons for breaking up with Cody.

Ooh, me thinks that things are not turning out like those three expected. I do feel sorry for Heather though, working at one of those places, not exactly the most ideal job. I wonder what she would do if Cody ended up showing up at her place of employment while she was working there. Or worse...

In any case I'm finding this really intriguing. I just hope that Heather's only problem is where she's working at, and not...welll let's just say if she's experiencing morning sickness then Cody might faint. (Chuckles) Keep up the good work.

InuGhost

I'm loving this story. Most times I don't care for songfics, but this is way better than any other song fic I have tried to read. Keep it up man.

Ooh, harsh for Cody... I wonder what Heather's lying to Cody about? Anyway, update soon!

Ouch poor Cody. Though I gotta wonder just what is going on with Heather. Mainly since I'm interested in her side of the story and what is happening with her. Cause it would certainly give indication if Heather really wants nothing more to do with Cody, or if she's being pressured into cutting ties with him.

ANyway good job with this chapter. You did a nice job with portraying their feelings. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

InuGhost

Ouch! I feel sorry for Cody here... hope to see what happens next soon!

Now this seems to have potential! Hope to see more chapters up soon!

Interesting so far. Please keep it up

Good chapter, and a nice idea for a story. Aside from feeling a little rushed once Trent started singing it was quite well done and written. And I'm curious to see what will happen next, and if Cody and Heather's paths will cross at college. Keep up the good work.

InuGhost

I liked this, Heather/Cody is a cool couple and fairly unexplored. Very nice!