Reviews for The end
Appropriate Pseudo chapter 1 . 8/23/2019
Gosh, I'm so tempted to be disappointed in Naruto...but i can't. I understand where they are both coming from. It is so goddamn hard to freely be anything in this world. Plus in the alternate ending i wrote in my head, Naruto comes to terms with the fact that he is meant to be with sasuke no matter what and fuck what people might , feels much better. Thank you for sharing.
Theoneandonlyjessica chapter 1 . 5/7/2018
... This was a good book
CocoCrunch chapter 1 . 10/14/2017
This made my heart ache. Another broken ending. Your stories never fail to amaze me, and without a doubt I will continue supporting each.
Momo chapter 1 . 8/11/2017
Ouch this one hurts! Love it that it's from Sasuke's POV and how it's constructed, going back and forth from past to present but also (the past) not in a sequential way, it made it all more interesting. I was surprised that it was Naruto who didn't want to come out to the others and broke it off and not Sasuke but it was a nice change ( considering that usually, especially in canon, is Naruto who can't leave Sasuke alone ahah). The ending was very sad, and very final I feel. As always thank you for writing and sharing it with us.
Vivaan chapter 1 . 7/1/2017
Man, you write so well it's almost unbearable. This was a beautiful one shot.
MoonPrincess623 chapter 1 . 2/9/2017
Naruto is an idiot, but it makes me wonder if something else was going on.
bartlettpear chapter 1 . 2/3/2017
This definitely left me feeling down, I love how realistic it feels though. I was reading the reviews and Skeezy's idea was definitely awesome because I want to see Sasuke happy and it is definitely Naruto's lost that he can't fantom openly being with Sasuke, Sasuke deserves better. Thanks for writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2016
this was rlly sad, but amazingly written.
I felt so bad for Sasuke, and a little bit pissed at Naruto. I mean, HE is the one who started it, and during all of their relationship all he was was weak.
A sequel to this would be amazing, because seeing a tragic ending for these two always break my heart... Anyway, this was truly amazing !
ATouchofWinter chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
That was tragic
Celebrindal01 chapter 1 . 5/20/2016
That is so sad... it's actually really beautiful.
I like how we go from past to present, we see piece by piece how it all started, and how it all finished.

It's not often when Sasuke is the one wanting to "come out" and not Naruto.
I find it so sad as I'm sure Naruto actually loves him (he started it all), and their friends certainly guessed or were open minded enough to not mind.

I can't imagine how Sasuke might be hurt... Naruto was weak this time, how definitely strange but good to read something so opposite of what we're used to see.

And your writing is perfect, I love reading your fics! : )
doubletroubleuchiha chapter 1 . 9/12/2015
Wow, that was very well written. As cliche as it is, my partner broke up with me a few months back, and I seriously can relate to Sasuke's situation.
You wrote it like you experienced both sides of the situation. The story seriously made me remember everything about my own previous experiences and feel everything too.
Honestly, what a wonderfully well written story.
silvimoon chapter 1 . 8/16/2015
Why do your stories always make me cry. This one left me logging for what could have been. This was so good, my heart is breaking for Sasuke.
kira9824 chapter 1 . 5/22/2015
Daaaamn... Why did I ever read this? Now I can't stop crying. Damn it, Naruto!
lom1234iu0 chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
I keep coming back to this! It's so saaaaad! I'm such a sucka for more happier endings...feel free to add another chapter or two?! Ohhh but it's still beautiful the way it is too! I love your naru/sasu fanfics so I hope you will continue writing more! :D
Austere Stryfe chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
Frankly speaking, I have no idea how to react. The story was so realistic, I couldn't relate. I've never had a relationship this complicated before (since I thought I was an alien because I didn't feel anything at all when we broke up, which you probably didn't want to know) and I didn't know what I should be feeling. Confusion, probably. Or just plain ignorance for not knowing the reality. Anyway, nice story. Gives credit for the saying that not everything in life ends in happy endings. Who'd reached the end and had the decency to retell about it anyway?
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