So many inconsistencies. -_-
So many things make no sense.
How is hatake sakumo, s-ranked shinobi, the bane of sand, leader of a full Battalion, is for the first time seeing what the combination of wind and fire ninjutsu looks like?
There are so many of these, that it's off putting.

What happened to the sequel

When’s the next chapter

What a fool.. Die from exhausting when training.. Fool.. Doesnt deserve second chance

Constructiveness:
Overall, it's a good chapter. Though, there are some plots holes.

One such hole is: In the first chapter, you had Naruto be taken back in time after an accident that occurred around the time that he was training on Turtle Island with Killer Bee.

This chapter: "He was likely the only one there to face three hostile Uchiha's, a hostile Kaguya, and multiple S-ranked shinobi."

According to the first chapter, he had just found out about the war from Bee and was attempting to leave the island. He hadn't even complete his Kyuubi training.

There are also some unfinished sentences, such as:
But that can be easily rectified will a beta and some proof-reading. A good tip to remember when reading over your work (in terms of plot points) is considering whether it all makes sense given what information you know. I'd try to look at the story from a reader's perspective.

I also don't really get why someone without war experience (Mikoto) would be named a commander. Putting her on Kushina's squad should've been enough precaution. She would still have the same ability and access to subdue the Kyuubi (also access to Naruto, who she is paired with). I'm guessing that it's to establish their current relationship dynamic and for the plot(?).
I figured that she, rather than Fugaku or both her and Fugaku (who was mentioned to have stronger eyes than her) was chosen to subdue the Kyuubi, because she knows the secret of who the jinchuuriki is and for plot purposes.

Overall Review for Ch.1-6:
The story is intriguing. Despite some errors, I find myself wanting to read more. The problem with the errors though, is that they can distract the reader from being enchanted with your story. Your writing is captivating. Running over errors, though, disenchants and dispels the reader from being fully engaged. You have a nice premise and have a good thing going for you in the charisma of your writing. I simply believe that the enchanting-ability that you as a writer seem to have can be improve or work better without certain errors.

On to the next chapter...

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This was a wonderful story. It was exactly what I was looking for, I was a little surprised you put Naruto with Mikoto. But I thought it was a wonderful pairing. I wonder if they'll have Itatchi and Sasuke together. I cannot wait to read this sequel to this. I was also wondering if they'll still have Gaara in the sequel, he's my favorite character I'd be so sad if you wasn't there. :3

Good story but very little character development. Seemed rushed.

*insert Bruh meme* as another reviewer said, it ended rather abruptly, and I know its 34k words, but it felt so much shorter.

Rereading this for the 4th time now

I like this version a lot better and wish u had continued it

Loved it! Please keep going!

Even though the ending was abrupt, this was still an excellent story. Chapter 14 states that there was going to be a sequel, but after checking your profile I couldn't find one. Since you have a story you updated in Jan, I know you are still an active writer on this site. I really hope one day your muse will come back to you, cause I for one would love to see what other changes Naruto will make in Konoha. Thanks for giving us what you have already written and Great Job!