I just finished Chapter 10 and I have enjoyed this story, but your last update was April 2012. I know it's been a long time, but, please, come back and help Harry find what he's always wanted...a real family.

I really liked this story wish there was more

Oh, I do hope that you continue this story. It is such an interesting read with a really wonderful/original plot in the NCIS/Harry Potter crossover category. I especially like the relationship between Gibbs and Harry and how protective Abby is over him already. But I also rather enjoy how you show realistically, the process it takes for a relationship such as a parent/child type to develop over time.

I am looking forward to reading about how Dumbledore and other people involved in Harry's like will react to Gibbs and the rest of the team. And what their reaction will be once Harry is entered forcibly into the Triwizard.

love it please write more

i love it hope u add more

please update, it's really interesting

Enjoyed reading :D

A great story here so far! Looking forward to reading more!

"Um…well it was a shield up until the last Quidditch match of the year, when we were playing Ravenclaw. Some of the Slytherins dressed up as dementors and tried to keep me from catching the snitch, but I used the charm while I was chasing it. We one," Harry felt the need to add in, smirking slightly when he recalled the look on Malfoy's face.

Don't you mean, "We won" not "We one"

When Harry ask about 'his stuff in England', I hope he also means Hedwig.

did you know 9 and 10 are the same chapters?

I've enjoyed this story, but your last update was April 2012. Does this mean you have abandoned the story. If 'yes', please reconsider.

You asked a couple chapters ago about Franks... I think Gibbs and Franks have more the Uncle/Nephew thing going on which would make Franks more like Harry's great uncle. Yes I think that some Harry/ Mike interaction would be good. I also think you need to bring Gibbs' dad into the story. Don't forget that this makes him a grandpa again.

please add more

This is a really great and believable story. I hope you find the inspiration to continue. I find it refreshing that you aren't just glossing over the fact that Harry obviously needs a period of adjustment to a truly loving and caring parental figure. It will be interesting to see what rules Harry and Gibbs agree on.