Wow! This story was spectacular. You made me believe in their love even with all the history that came with it. Your story was raw and perfect.

Love the talk Edward had with Tony.

I thought you did a great job showing Tony and his thoughts. Aaron is not insane.

I like what's happening to Edward.

Oh my, how could Mr. Masen feel that way!

I feel badly for the Masens.

I can't imagine how difficult this must be for Edward.

My stomach dropped before I knew she had a nightmare. Wow!

I'm happy they're going to get married.

I'm glad he was honest and told his parents the truth.

I'm glad Edward and Charlie had the talk.

Oh god, that was such a great chapter. She got though to him.

You made her feelings believable. They loved each before she knew which makes the story ring true.

A beautiful song that shows Edward really loves Bella and he's a good person. He's had do much trauma.

Aro is totally insane !