God I'm shipping these two so hard right now.

aww i hope you continue with this. I cant believe the show was cancelled, its a great show and i dont understand why people didnt like it also i dont understand why so many of the shows Summer Glau have been in have been cancelled since they were also great. What is wrong with the world? lol

I totally agree with you! Stupid! Why do they have to cancel it! Although to be honest I got the feeling it would happen, just sucks :( I hope you continue this story despite all that!

Nice start. Looking forward to see where you're taking this. I hope we'll get more insight on how Vince comes to terms with his attraction, considering he's technically still a married man.

not bad! 2nd chp please?

Great work so far, and good idea of what happens after the last scene in "Razer." But as much as I like Orwell, it would be too unrealistic to have Vince just forget about Dana unless she moves on or something happens to her. As it is, you should definitly start with Orwell telling Vince details of her life, such as her real name. Whether or not you want her to tell him her feelings is up too you. Either way, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

I like this story. Please keep writing.

Oh my god this is SO CUTE! I plan on writing my own view on what happened after episode 9. I am so worried and damn the producers damn NBC for cancelling The Cape.

This was really good I enjoyed this.

The way Orwell said "Yes Vince, everything's wonderful" gave her right away. It was maybe the most unconvincing reassurance I've ever heard! lol I'm glad that Vince, being a cop after all, picked that up immediately in your story.

What a great start! This story looks very promising. I can't wait to read the next chapter!