er, chapters 13 and 14 are repeats of each other. Just so you're aware.

Be careful about things like content and legalities, but you've got some talent.

why is chapter 14 a duplicate of chapter 13?

seems like this "chapter 3" is a duplicate of Chapter 2, n'est-ce pas?

My only fault with this story is how casually Ron handles the affair so this would imply that they have already slept with each other many times already? Hr seems kind of a slut :

The world you portray them in feels much darker it is going to be interesting seeing the likes of f/g.

Oh wow you portrayed this scene from Dh way darker and through hermione pov made it much more ominous and creepy, brilliant :)

Lovely chapter.

Just dropping another well deserved review and want to express my appreciation over how well written and original your story is, not a cliche in sight! I also am elated over the fact that both actually challenge each other whether it's intellectually or sexually XD instead of cringey overbearing and robotic fluff, your story just feels real and immersive, brilliant, and hot!

Oh joy, I've fallen for this story and the style in which u write, the way they act around each other is just so, them!

You portray both of them so perfectly, bravo.

Wooooooooow :)))))))

I am really enjoying this beautifully written story.

I remember this story now, I remember this was the chapter that turned me off originally, but I shall push past the twisted relationship Harry and Ginny had, and focus on the harmony.

I'm all for whatever floats peoples boats when it comes to bedroom activities as long as it's between two consenting adults, but the bdsm going on between Harry and Ginny wasn't healthy , especially their past exploits referenced.

What Harry did to Hermione was lighthearted bondage wherein the sub got the most pleasure, seems to me Ginny was getting off on the bondage of Harry much more than he ever did.

The horcrux had more influence on Ginny than shed like to admit I think.

Harry is such a doormat because his lack of reference due to his upbringing he didn't know what a healthy relationship looked like though his and Hermione's is a step in the right direction.

Oh and despite how unrealistic it seems harmony shippers prefer when Harry and Hermione are each others firsts.

Wonderful, richly written story thus far.

I spend a week trying to find a really good story and i finally did it! I love it! Your harry is sexy and funny and perfect
And i love this hermoine i think she's daring and hot
I dont know, you're a great writer