Reviews for Breathe
Ayerim Herrera chapter 1 . 5/20
truly love it 3
fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 10/13/2015
This one shot captured the closeness these two share as teammates and perhaps a little more. I like the way the story unfolded along with Shikamaru's worry and tenderness when dealing with the task at hand. Thanks for sharing.
Arlene chapter 1 . 7/14/2015
i like it. It's short and sweet and fun to read. I like that the progression of their relationship is so slow. Thanks!
Nebulous Paradigms chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
Lovely! ShikaIno is the best and you've really got the dynamics of their relationship down :)

If you plan on coming back to this, I'd love to see an extension/exposition :)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
this is so great! i can totally see it happening :)
Ann chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
This was just beyond cute. Go ShikaIno!
FlameOfAFriend94 chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
I have to admit, I usually prefer Shikamaru and Temari as a couple as opposed to Shikamaru and Ino, but you made me second guess that. This one-shot was great and extremely cute. You made the pairing work for me. Good job!
lets.go.broncos47 chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
What happened to Ino? I kind of what to know now. :):):)
ordellc chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
I had to review this one because ShikaIno is one of my favorite parings from Naruto. (:

Overall, this is most likely the best oneshot/drabble I've read about any paring on this site.

The only thing that I could think of that should be pointed out was that I wasn't really sure what had happened to Ino. Yeah, she had a wound on her thigh, but I think for me, it might've flowed a little better if you described a little of what happened to her or how they got into the forest in the first place.

Anyways, like I said before, I loved this oneshot. (:
Arkun chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
This was really cute. I really liked how you wrote it and the word selection complemented the scene which you were trying to create. I like it a lot. But I think you should make it longer.
jerk-bender5ever chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
I'm a sucker for these two :)

Worth the read.
bakaindisguise chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
I felt a sudden need for a good ShikaIno oneshot - and I'm very glad I came across yours :) That was sweet and had a happy ending, just what I like :) Keep writing Shikaino! I'll follow you! :p
littlemelonatplay chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
It makes me happy to know that people are still writing stories for this pair. It was cute and I didn't see any mechanical errors. Thanks for posting. :)
celeste carla chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
nicely written! kudos to you!

their roles as medic was turned. hahaha.. nice to read what shikamaru would do when their roles were reversed and she was the one in need of medical attention.
MidnightLuve chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
lol i liked it cute :3
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