Wow that was amazing

So much emotion and wonderfully written

And that last scene with Aslan was absolutely beatiful

Hail the mighty Aslan. Son of God, Prince of heaven, King of Narnia and Earth. The Great Lion!

I worship the works of C.S Lewis and I love this fanfiction, and shall have fun imagining how it alters the plot of the series, seeing as the Pevansie's no longer have the doubt and feelings of abandonment seen in the beginning of Prince Caspian. Does it change their decisions?

Over and out!

Hey!
Wow, this was just amazing! :)
I loved it so much!

Alicia :)

This was interesting. I like it.

I feel so sorry for the kings and queens.

I LOVE this! Great job!

I just... Wow. This was marvelous. I really don't have any words to describe how I feel about this work, other than the fact that it was beautiful.
By The Mane,
Inky

Cool story:)

very well written. I enjoyed it immensely. Keep writing!

Very well done! Well thought through.

"Jack Lewis." I applaud your knowledge.

May Aslan be with You,

~Writey

Love this, great writing! Would you consider writing a sequel or at least something in this universe you have created? Your characters are some of the best developed that I have read.

this is great. it would be really awesome if you made a sequel and/or altered this story where at the end they get reverted back to adults and taken back to Narnia with their mom (and/or dad)

just a story idea for you that I've had that i think you'd be great at writing (i'm not good with long stories):

every year in Narnia is a day in England, if the four disappeared on a Sunday morning it wouldn't be until the next weekend that their mom would be able to come up and talk to Professor Kirke about it. she stumbled into the wardrobe tuesday morning (9 yrs for the four)...

This was very good. I like this type of story very much. I'd love to find just ONE where they stop to explain to her why they came hom so different. Done properly, of course, not glazing over the story or their Mum's reactions. So far no luck.

May I suggest you edit your story details? You have no character listed, that's bad for business. Mrs. Pevensive IS one of the Characters to choose from. You should have a few more hits that way- though she's not high on the list of favorites to look for I bet. Still, it'll help.

very good story. this is absolutly beautiful.

Aw, and it was so GOOD...until you paired Lucy with Tumnus. GRR.

But it's still well-written. So...

*bip* I have added this fic to my community. I like to notify people of this, since FF doesn't.