That was really good...too bad it stopped.

This is awesome! Where's the rest of it?! XD seriously, keep going with it! Xx

AHAHAHA, I can't wait to read Aerrow's reaction. Total dumbfoundedness. Oh jeez. Keep going! :)

Dun dun duuuuuuuuun!

my jaw just fell at this chap

very well writen i fell like am there

but i do feal like smacking piper

:O

my jaw droped at the last line, still i like it

Can't wait for your update and to see what happens next, poor Aerrow XD

i cant wait till the next chapter, please let it be soon.

great tension between ace and aerrow, great tension between aerrow and piper and great tension between piper and ace. your portrayals are always so likeable, because they're loyal to the show in many ways and yet loyal to the adaptations you've created. again, aerrow playing the villain a little, presenting the perfect manipulations of dark ace.

perfect cliffhanger too !

Hah! Oh man, poor Aerrow! I can't take this, I'm so excited to see what happens~!

I love this :D

Ohhhh. Here comes Aerrow. I love this story SOOOOOO much! Please update fast! ASAP!:)

We are surely durely enjoying it too :D

I have always felt compassion for Dark Ace, he just needs some1 kind and loving to get him on the right path, and Piper is sooo made for him, to heal his heart... :)

LOVED IT but u evil evil person how could u give us a cliffy (-is dat a word? oh well,) please update soon! i gotta c how aerrow reacts!

ciao

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DO ANOTHER ONE FAST! i want to know how aerrow reacts.