Reviews for Ranma, Master of the Cards
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26
Thank god it's more than just Duel Monsters! I got worried when you said you were gonna use the English dub names. Most YGO fic that's centered around the Eng dub is usually just going to revolve around DM card games, and i hate that cuz Atem/the puzzle is about more than that, especially in the beginning. It's just what the series ended up being, which still saddens me.
Atem is called the King of Games not of Duel Monsters, he plays and wins all kinds of gambling (and Yugi didnt earn that series end win, dont me). People are always limiting him to just the one thing. The name of the series is called Yu-Gi-Oh for crying out loud - Game King!
I'm always leery of English dub names in fic because of it, not a whole lot of the anime watchers read the manga, nor saw "season 0", so their fic is usually so narrow-minded.

Having Atem take Ranmas form is also a hugely nice touch. When doing AU fic where someone else gets the puzzle, they still keep him looking like Yugi when it wouldn't make much sense. Atem forgot everything about himself, he wouldn't retain his form nor be a Yugi lookalike (which is also a series petpeeve of mine, that Atem never got his own body/form; he was stuck with Yugis, just slightly altered. Yugi isnt his reincarnation, that's not how it works; Atem should've gotten his own face. #foreverbitter).
Instead of it being a difference between them hair-wise, a strange look in Ranmas eyes might've worked as well. Atem has been trapped in that thing for millenia with a dark god, a feral gaze or a manic energy about him is a good indicator of their swapping conciousness'. Atem comes off as a little unhinged due to his grayer morals and mischievous expressions, not just mussing Yugis hair.

I really like it so far.
joeyblast chapter 10 . 10/25/2019
To Pegasus: You idiot. You realize that Ranma has the right, whether the Shadow Game ended or not, to invoke a Punishment Round on you? You are living on borrowed time. For me, I hope that you're banished to the Realm of Nothingness, where you'll fade into Nothingness itself, never to be seen again. You can't ever hide from the sins of your past.

Please reply to this as Pegasus, I want to be able to have it as if he answered it himself.
Hikari Nova chapter 2 . 6/23/2018
interesting though you do know Yami was the name Yugi gave Atem back before they knew the pharaohs actual name right? and ancient Egypt had no interaction with the far east Asian nations mid east yes but not far east
mrstardust89 chapter 11 . 10/7/2015
I hope to read the next chapter so please update soon.
ponylover2 chapter 11 . 10/3/2015
next chapter
Red Death chapter 11 . 7/4/2015
I know after a hiatus of 10 years this story being continued is extremely unlikely, but one can hope. I liked the story the first time I read it years ago, and I like it now!
Ranmaleopard chapter 10 . 2/12/2015
This is really just awesome I can't wait for more! Please come back and continue your extremely interesting fics!
Ranmaleopard chapter 11 . 2/11/2015
This is just awesome I really can't wait for more!
Veedramon chapter 7 . 8/23/2013
The cards are quite unbalanced, but so they where in the first seasons of Yu Gi Oh...
Veedramon chapter 6 . 8/23/2013
Due to his special ability, CONSTRUCTOR should be quite weak in atack.
Veedramon chapter 5 . 8/22/2013
Too bad Ranma can't use the card to permanently give Gourry a sword...
Veedramon chapter 4 . 8/22/2013
Wait, you are using Luna?
Veedramon chapter 3 . 8/22/2013
Wait, shouldn’t one of the puzzle users be in the tournament? And Ranma got careless, to use the portal where anyone could see him.
Veedramon chapter 2 . 8/22/2013
Well, interesting...
Veedramon chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Well, this will be interesting...
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