I don't just see the link with the manga of Naruto only characters .What about the shi themselves ? Certainly they have beings who could destroy cities hell even countries if we count Hashirama and Madara ? What about their physical prowess since maybe everyone doing their best to receive a huge training boost ALA ROck Lee ? . From what i see you try to create a universe where narutoverse could be mixed with Warcraft but it"s done badly . Take your time to allow a better writing if you want to have a new story

Well your story is good in term of idea but in terms of representation you really need a Beta and a good one who will help you but don't forget that the rest is up to you you need basically read some books like novels to understand how to understand the writing of the story , you cannot simply add the element just like that such the guns and the technology you would either make a presentation just by showing how it is by making the information with one of your characters . For Scifi stuff read Azimov , Ian Banks , Latium of romain Cazumeau . Honor HARRINGTON for his space battle ultra realistic .

(Sobs). So I read this really cool story - props to you for making a story so completely different - and discover its future had been shredded, mutilated, scorched to the point it’s liquidated, thrown into a demonic coffin and thrown into a sun by the very person who brought it into the world.

Lol, just kiddin’, well not that your story was pretty cool, even if I hadn’t read it since it’s last update seven years ago. I understand your reasoning, but I just wanted to let you know you did a good job with the story as far as it went.

How can you expect a thousand followers reviewers and favorite(rs)

Will they visit Medivh's tower for it is anexus of fel magic?

Well its a good thing you're not but you need to update more man/woman, we readers are waiting

Does Shi still utilizes the use of thr Bijuu's? And thr Akatsuki members are the Elite Vanguard, yes?

yes a beta helps no your wighting is not bad you just need longer chapters and stay on one character its confusing if you switch from one to the other.

it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates

Aww, oh well, at least you explained why you stopped, and honestly it's better that way so you mislead like you said. Also I don't think your writing sucks, sure there's a mistype here and there, but story-telling wise it's great. Well explained, not boring, and well written. And getting a Beta wouldn't be bad, they could help you fix the mistypes, but also might give you new ideas, or help expand your story in a different direction.

And for your next story, just go with whatever you feel like at the moment. I'm sure people will like it, whatever it may be. Well, can't wait to see what you write next, and while I'm sad this story was cut short, thx for at least explaining, because it sucks when a great story is stopped without reason and one is never given. Anywho, good luck with your next story.

I really like this one too bad. I recommend making a folder and writing down the story ideas as you think them up. Shi gave me lots of interesting ideas, look forward to seeing what you write.

I find this story kind of strange but it pretty good. You mentioned a pairing in the your AN I would have to vote for both femGaara and Jaina. It wouldn't be that far fetched for 'The Shi' to be fine with polygamy (they do seem to have a feudal system, which Lords in feudal systems were known to have consorts). Hell the type of government that the Humans have in Warcraft is similar to back in the middle ages, and the Kings were known to take lovers that the Queen knew about. Queens would sometimes take lovers back then but they kept it a secret from their husband...

it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates

:D, so I see you were inspired by Dead Space 2, and I have to say, I don't give a damn cause it just made feel happy to see that in the story. Also, I knew it! There had to be robo-tech in this, wouldn't be a futuristic Narutoverse if there wasn't any robots to tear shit up. And yes do explain the invasion, would be nice to see the weapons in action. For the pairing, I'd have to say Naruto/Jaina or Naruto/Sylvanas cause I would love to see how the either would work.

Also, I'm curious, does Naruto team contain the Tailed-beasts, or are they just called after them for a achievement of sorts they did/are doing in the war? (Highfive for reminding me of the Starcraft 2 trailer and Isaac getting a new Suit scene while describing Kiba's armouring process.)

if you want 500 reviews your not going to get with just two chapters post more please

yes shameless beging thats what this is