youve really got to pity morgan here, asshole he may be but he was always doing what he believed was right: and nobody deserved that fate

This is deliciously twisted. A very imaginative Death Curse, with an eerily apt poetic justice... and just the sort of thing that Harry - even as a youth - would do to to his killer ('cuz mere death just wouldn't be nearly bad enough). The man has a heart of gold, but he re-defines snarkiness.

This is fascinating! I am just awed at the concept and your writing style!

I like this. It's an interesting idea.

Whoa, neat!

That was amazing, loved the lines, "My name is Donald Morgan, and I'm the only wizard dumb enough to advertise my services in the phone book. Look me up." You are a great writer.

I lol'd.

Funny idea.

Awesome take and even though I am sad that Dresden is dead, it is an interesting what-if scenario. Would love to see more one-shots on this what-if universe.

Gemini

Great surprise ending! original idea! Good Job! OK you killed Harry Dresden but that why fan fiction is fun - it explores new ideas. I liked this!

Interesting concept. I wonder how this could change the history of Butcher's universe.

A very interesting concept, thats solidly written. Congrats! Please keep them coming (more chapters or Dresden Files stories)!

A very very awesome idea!

Aww. You killed Dresden! CILLAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!