Hello !

I liked the relationship between Nova and Kerrigan, and the turns of events in your story !

So continue ! :)

Hello.

A strong story with a decent end. I like to read your story, which advanced regularly in some points in the course of which we recognized all heroes of your story.

So happy to read you.

I really like your story ! Despite I don't understand all what you wrote, I like events you imagine and how plots and figures are going along since the first chapter. We see that you have do a innovative storyline about SC2.

I hope to finish and read the futur chapters of your story, because it's magnificent story.

I really like your story and I progress in his reading expecting to have all story - if you can continue writing this story that I love.

Thanks a lot to communicate this story in the past.

It was far more easy to write when all the things looked far more simple.

Now. It became very controversial, and there is clear divisions among readers.

This was really a good old day before what we saw in the Heart of the Swarm.

It seems Very difficult to get many good reviews around StarCraft FanFiction now.

This is a very good Story. I love it.
But are you still intending to continue it?

Hey so far i've read about a fourth of this story and i'm liking it a lot. Haven't played starcraft in a while but i think now i want to play the game and the expansiones again. If the rest of the story is as good as the chapters i've read so far i won't have troubles reaching chapter 80, which i think is Your latest update, keep up the good work!

It always amazes me to what great lenghts do some men go in order to achieve their aims, hold on to their power or take revenge. Captain Bock's perspective, as well as Mengsk and Duke's recorded conversation is a testimony to the lowliest pits human concience cand be locked up in. To reach such a point and not go insane...

Indeed, that piece of information that the Adjutant revealed would definately deal a crippling blow to the emperor's already sinking popularity; it would also help with Raynor's honest portrayal that I think Kate Lockwell will release on the news.

The prospect of one regaining his memories through the use of khaydarin crystals was indeed a new thing for me.
Also, the attack on Deadman's rock seems like a suicidal idea at this point for general Ridgeway, for he cannot possibly know the full extent of mira han's allies, resource...

Sarah Kerrigan's trial before the Daelaam Hierarchy was one of the biggest challenges of her life (in this fic at least).
How does one live with what they had been forced to do for a full four years period, having been captured and infested by the zerg? The fact that she retained her sanity, as well as her ability to care, to feel guilt, empathy, love and so many other humane traits is remarkable in itself.
As for the trial itself, the description and dialogue are well placed, realistic. Your Nahaan, as opposed to Fanfiction Dragon's counterpart, had brought valid arguments and has proven to be (at least partially) level-headed. The other protoss are also wary of her, which is normal, given the circumstances. Uncertainty can be extremly unnerving, especially for those who had been confrointed with betrayal.
Ultimately, the efforts of her lover and her ghost friend, plus the fact that she chose to be sincere helped Kerrigan in proving that she wanted to atone for her unintentional crimes.

General Ridgeway seems like a very competent commander to me. Its too bad for the Dominion that people like him are either ignored, pushed aside or-in his case at least- pushed to the limits of their capabilities by those with not enough knowledge of fighting a war (Mengsk, his goons etc.)

On the other hand, we have Zeratul that keeps trying to unearth the mystery revolving around the prophecy, the overmind and Sarah Kerrigan.

By the way, it's good to see that the deinfested ghost regained her humanity and is ready to help Raynor clear his mind and soul.

Another review, huzzah.

Well, I guess Sarah hasn't forgotten how to fight as a Ghost, though I could imagine that she would react differently towards the Zerg than everyone else. Especially given their past. Those Zerg used to be her servants after all. Perhaps she could feel some sort of sadness because she has to kill them? Or she could use a trick or two she picked up as the Queen of Blades during combat? We know that even though she was deinfested, there's still something Zerg inside her (like when she hissed at Valerien on the Hyperion).

Well, another review incoming!

So I guess Sarah and Nova have a rather friendly relationship. It's somewhat strange since I always thought that both of them had hardly anything to do with each other. Well, at Sarah didn't care much about Nova at least.

To me they never had much in common. They are Ghosts, yes. But that's it. Perhaps it would be interesting to see how they manage to form a friendship even though they are basically completely different?

Good mix of dialouge and action, geat inventiveness. Still loving this story.