Haha i liked the story. Really humerous especially the ending.
Nice job. :D

hhahahahahahaha what the fudge Takumi? xDDDDDDDDDDDDD

So funny! hahahahahahaha

That was cute! A story about Takumi observing Akira's actions!
Hope to read more stories of yours! Good Luck!

Ahahah! That was cute! I really like your stories!
Please write more!

Rebby.

Wow. I really must be stupid, because until now, I had no idea you were on here XD. I mean, I knew, but I had no idea what your usename was...

Anyway, I'm still fairly new to this anime. Dsiscovered it pretty recently so I can't really give you much of a critique, but I did laugh out loud at the last line. I really liked this-it was really and enjoyable read.

Just one thing-I thought Fuuka Academy was spelled with two 'u's and one 'k'...that's about it.

Hm! Interesting story! All females are actually O-bake!

I'm very glad to read another Mai-HiME story from you, and I hope I can come back as well. Looking forward to other Mai-HiME stories from you!

:D nice

The story gives a relaxing feeling it feels like I'm reading an omake of Takumi and Akira!

Make more it makes people delighted at the most times

hehehehe!