Reviews for Temptress |
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Beizanten chapter 3 . 4/11/2019 this is so great a d funny |
Beizanten chapter 2 . 4/11/2019 great |
Dragon Blood chapter 20 . 3/11/2019 loved it |
Wense chapter 6 . 1/8/2019 Omg this is so good, can't wait to read next chapter |
Wense chapter 4 . 1/8/2019 omg that was interesting! Are their spirits meeting when they dream? Megamind is so deeply in love with Roxanne! Their dialogue and his confession made my heart melt! I hope he won't take the pill and that he will soon be able to really seek love and comfort in her arms. |
Wense chapter 3 . 1/8/2019 My, that was good! The kissing was very hot and I loved how Megamind was first hesitant like a child afraid of getting a smack and being told "No". Can't wait to read their next meeting ;) |
Wense chapter 2 . 1/8/2019 I like it so far, though the vibe of the fic seems darker then the movie (not a bad thing, just different) They already seem smitten with each other, which promises some hot moments in the upcoming chapters ;) I like the idea of Roxanne wearing his colors and him loving when she says his name. |
Guest chapter 20 . 2/28/2018 Back when you mentioned he never forgot anyone, I thought for sure you were going to mention Bernard again, but ok. And i kinda imagine the nurses daughter being the girl who tells Megs that the subway is closed. |
CharlieBoneFan chapter 20 . 7/17/2017 Great story! |
Wolflover235 chapter 11 . 2/6/2017 Ok. So I randomly decided to review. I am liking this. I was a little unsure with the beginning but as it progressed it wasn't just one of those one night stands as they thought it would be. I also like what you did with the past. Like not only did a BABY just get raised in a prison. Someone actually looked after him. And I never even thought about all the "experiments" other people would have wanted to do on him. At the same time it kinda reminds you of Zootopia. Except, there actually is a deleted scene of and predators needing to be locked away and tested on. I wonder when they will open up again. There's definitely some make up needed between them. Off to the next chapter. |
egmon73 chapter 20 . 9/4/2016 Great fic! You have rewritten with amazing changes the whole Megamind story. I really liked the dreams idea and the parallel universes. It really fitted well into the story. Very interesting! |
Minion chapter 15 . 11/3/2015 The story is great :)! But the line was "good luck with your date" your version accually did make sense, sorry it was just bothering me a little. |
werewolf6780 chapter 12 . 7/5/2015 Very nice... If not a little tiny bit dark with Megamind's past... Though I'm not too happy with the lack of protection, and kids - reproduction was never the goal...anyway, you're a great writer! Keep writing |
VKMP chapter 20 . 3/13/2015 I would like to see this story from the other universe's POV. |
Anonymously Mega chapter 8 . 3/7/2015 NO0O0O0O0O0O0O0O0O0O0O0O0O0O0O0O0O0O0O!111ONE11! |