*Sighs* Seriously. The fandom for MLP sucks. All it ever cares about is romance, swearing, NSFW related type adult stuff that should never have existed when God first created time, and of course, fanfics that contain these examples. Seriously, any fanbase who reads this, and I mean ANY fanbase, you have a romance/NSFW cartoon fetish and it's not healthy, especially if you're an adult (a thing i also truly despise despite being one myself). Now, get yourself a grenade, hold it in your hand and don't let go.

I like the second ending better.

Ewww

It was a very good fanfiction keep going and maybe you will write a fanfiction that I can say was my best

WHAT. THE. FUCK! THAT WAS SO DAMNIT GAY

NO! NO PONY is as random as pinkie pie NO PONY!111

omg now i wanna read mooorrrrrreeeeee

i like it i really like it

2nd ending is way better ;) can u do more twilight-rainbow ships?

awesome, great chapter! spike, where's spike? also, (just cause i like these things) can u do it again, change the story line a bit, and do it in human? thx!

Why is this so adorable?

It is, but why?

I rate this ten stars out of 5.

i like this ending better then the first one . and i love how your like "as they kissed. in the rain." lol i hope you make a squeal or something cuz this sounds like it'll be interesting!

wow... angry much? :/

lol "i must have fell asleep! and then fell! on my back." XD

i cant stop reading )