| Reviews for The Queen's of malkshur |
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  Josh chapter 2 . 9/8/2011 This...this ABONINATION of a book is... a shame on humanity |
| josh chapter 1 . 9/8/2011 GAYYYYYYYYYYYYY LOLOOLOLOOLOLOLOLOL |
 The Jaded Captain chapter 7 . 8/29/2011 That is sooo good, please keep writing :D |
| Mystic Archer Horse chapter 7 . 7/26/2011 Oh, this sounds like it's getting good. I hope I can read more soon. |
| Roeskva chapter 7 . 7/24/2011 Nice hearing some background - and learning that Kalnor is indeed a queen! It will be great if she joins the Tok'ra! |
| Mystic Archer Horse chapter 6 . 7/19/2011 To be honest, I don't what to think of this chapter. I suppose that would be, in part, because some chapters can not be helped but be boring. It was informative though. Hopefully the next chapter shall have a bit more to it? |
| Roeskva chapter 6 . 6/13/2011 OK, now I'm _really_ confused! I don't think you can have 1/2 a chromosome, though, half-alien or not :) In any case - very much looking forward to an explanation! I hope the Tok'ra show up soon! |
| Mystic Archer Horse chapter 5 . 5/12/2011 Wanna know what would have made this chapter better? Not cutting off where you did! Other than that, I liked the chapter and how you put some background in there. |
| Roeskva chapter 5 . 5/8/2011 I am still very confused (more confused, actually) are they 'sisters' but from different realities? Looking forward to hearing how you get this worked out! |
| HathorGirl chapter 5 . 5/8/2011 Interesting story! I have no idea what is going on! Timetravel? |
| Mystic Archer Horse chapter 4 . 4/27/2011 The two girls are from our reality, aren't they? The future perhaps? I've got limitless amount or theories shooting through my head at the moment. I am finding this a bit slow right now, specially with such short chapters. Perhaps longer chapters could be given? More details would be nice as well. What are they wearing? That could be a big help as to where they are from. How old do the girls appear? I could send you a review that is all questions but that might bore you quite a bit, even if it does get you to thinking. I look forward to reading the next chapter and seeing where this goes. Hopefully once you get past all the boring begining stuff, the story will become interesting. I don't plan on giving up on this fic until it just gets to random or gets really bad. Right now I say it can go either really good or really bad. I'm hoping this will go the 'really good' way. |
| General Mac chapter 4 . 4/26/2011 so far sounds good, don't know where sam comes into it though, more pretty please |
| Roeskva chapter 4 . 4/25/2011 Well, they all three seems like nice people! I hope they get some more food (real food and not just jello - which I don't think has much nutrients) soon. Looking forward to hearing more about them! |
| xx-chelsea-x chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 take a chill pill :) |
| Pagan Twylight chapter 3 . 4/12/2011 This is interesting. You do need to do some serious editing, however. You seem to be having a problem with your verb tenses and using where for were. I look forward to the next chapter. Pagan |
