Reviews for Wishing Hole |
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![]() ![]() Really great chapters 1-10 was incredulously awesome |
![]() ![]() Chapters 7-8 were great |
![]() ![]() Chapters 3-6 were awesome... Keep it up |
![]() ![]() Chapters 3-4 |
![]() ![]() Chapters 1-2 were greatl |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just have to say that both of yours are very,very good.I look forward to maybe more chapters in both or just wishing hole? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god. Favorite sentence of this story: "Miley cajoled and flapped her arms at Lilly to herd her to the couch." I love this so much. Although there are some loose ends, like what'll happen with Joannie (or rather, her feelings toward Lilly; will more problems arise or will she come to terms with the rejection?) and Miley's family meeting Lilly, I enjoyed this ending. You've probably been asked this several times, but will there possibly be a sequel? I'd be content with this as the last installment to this series, though I would be extremely happy if there was another. Regardless, I enjoyed every single chapter more than you'll ever know. So for that, thank you. [: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Confused at the end. Someone else is there? Miley, maybe? Kinda creepy. LOL. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the interaction between Joannie and Lilly. The situation is bittersweet, but still ended on a fairly decent note. Though I do wonder if Joannie really did kiss her. At first, I thought Lilly just mistook Miley for Joannie. Considering they're both brunettes and Lilly didn't have her glasses on, it wouldn't be hard to believe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Lilly. You poor girl. I feel so bad for her for having to go through all that guilt and pain. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noooo. Don't go, Miley! Come baaack! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gaaahh. Such a suspenseful ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah, I love Lilly so much. I personally don't believe in heroes, but if I did, she'd be the best of them all. The way she sacrifices her own well being to try to help Suzanne, enduring even more pain just so she'd know she's really there and help is on the way, doing everything she can to distract and calm her by having her tell her a story about her daughter. True dedication to what she does for a living. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohmygod, Jackson has a wife. A model nonetheless? What is this blasphemy. LOL. I'm glad he didn't crack a joke or anything when Miley came out to them though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how that segment in the beginning is so similar to the one from the last chapter. Just wondering, are these lyrics to a song or did you write them? Bwahahah, Joannie and co. to the rescue! |