Awh that was adorable!

I love how JJ was so motherly to Jack and that you added things to it that a child that is like Jack might do if their mother or father was killed while they were in the house and young. Love the bear being named Haley and the whole thing just being so sweet of a story. Think I am going to add this to my Community of criminal minds just because of this being such a sweet,heartwarming,and sad story.

This was a great story. I really liked the begining where JJ and Garcia were having coffee together liked they had promised at the end of "JJ". I really luove the way you showed the bond between JJ and Jack here, which is something that isn't explored on the show at all.

On another note what are the PCA's and CMFFA?

wow. very intense and sad. I hope this gets continued. A very big series could come out of such an amazing start... not necesarily slash, maybe a BAU family fic all trying to help Hotch heal himself and his son.

I always figured Jack would be totally damaged from his dad's lifestyle and the way his mom dies. Especially once he understood that it happened BECAUSE of his dad's job... the job he thought was so cool.

That was extremely sweet!

This is so sweet )

Great story*

Beautiful T.T

That was just so sweet and heartfelt, and a tear-jerker. I almost wish J.J was his mommy here. Very well-written and emotionally-elaborate. Good job!

Aww, that was a really sweet story. It's so touching how JJ is with henry and everything... congrats for your Award, too.

Aww, this was adorable/sad/sweet all in one. Great job.

It was so touching ! I loved it.

I ABSOLUTLY love this! by far one of the best stories I've ever read !

awhh, this is adorable

i think you displayed jacks feelings about haleys death much better than CBC did. honestly (:

I love this story. It's so cute and so sweet.

good story!