Dude I got to admit the first 9 chapters and the first bit of chapter 10 were great loved the angst. loved the hatred and bitterness that filled Naruto then you just have him … let it go? come oooon man! I've read the last 9 chapters with revulsion boiling in my stomach. this is so lame. Sakura broke his heart into large pieces. Hinata curb-stomped his heart into tinny-tinny pieces. Ino tossed those pieces into a fucking grinder and turned them to FUCKING DUST. AND you just have him apologize. fuck you man. just fuck you. this is a steamy pile of shit. no vindictiveness? fucking forgiveness?

I know i’m a couple years late, but I can’t be the only one who still thinks that baiting readers into thinking yoruichi would be with naruto and then doing THAT was not only a shitty development, but a dick move from the author, right?

Hm.

This...development between Ino and Hinata is just so random. It's not necessarily a bad thing but the way that it was implemented was just...lazy, to be honest.

Honestly reading this chapter again pisses me off all over again. Hinata 100% does not deserve Naruto in this story and I loathe that you paired them together. What Hinata did to Naruto is completely unforgivable no matter what her reasons were. She has loved Naruto all her life, her ninja way is “to never back down and never give up” just as Naruto’s is and yet she gave up on their relationship and worse did it in a way that completely destroyed Naruto after Sakura already did the same. You say she married Kiba to protect Hanabi? That is a bullshit reason, at the time Hanabi was far too young to be forced into a marriage as proven by the fact she only married Konohamaru two weeks ago. As for Hinata leaving the village and her family behind as a reason for Naruto taking her back? That is complete and utter bull shit and you are trying to make Hinata out to be some sort of victim and it is disgusting. Frankly put this story is highly unrealistic and makes Naruto out to be a pathetic fool who doesn’t know how to stand up for himself and it is sickening. I know I may sound like I hate this story but that isn’t necessarily true, it is a good story I just hate your decisions regarding writing it.

It is really sad to see Naruto forgive Hinata so easily. Apparently you don’t know how heart break works. This story would have been much better if Naruto shut off his emotions and sacrificed his life to finish off the akatsuki and Ino, SakuraHinata all cried together over what they screwed up. This is coming from a naruhina and a naruino fan, the way you set this story up the pairings do not really make sense and make Naruto look like a pathetic child going back to an old toy.

Normally I am not one to say this but this story would be so much better if Naruto didn’t end up with anybody. He had his heart broken three times and despite the reasons it still happened and while Naruto is a forgiving person everyone has a breaking point and he definitely reached it. It doesn’t matter how heart felt Hinata’s feelings are. For three years she lived with Kiba and no matter her reasons she clearly broke Naruto’s heart and as for Sakura and Ino it is the same thing. Of course they would regret breaking up with him but it doesn’t change the fact they did and for him to go back to any of them would honestly be pathetic.

This was a nice fic :)

Can I make my own version?

This is just retarded

Shit

I know this is from many years ago, but really, people should just stop using fanfiction dot net. They can enforce whatever rules they like on a ghost town. In fact, if there's a new, better, less discriminating site for fanfiction I would greatly appreciate a pm with the address. Thanks.

Old story, but here is the bones of it.

Naruto looses his women, he's fucked and he takes them all back. If that's your kick, have at it.

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So wait if this is post war then naruto should know kuramas name and im assuming that no kaguya or ten tails happened.

Okaaay... Do the men Extremely like being cucked?