Brrrrrr, that's so CREEPY.
I just wanna wrap Sam up in a hug and never let anything hurt him. And Dean too, for good measure.
I love the way you've written the boys here, and I love how understated the threat was. Like, it coouulld have just been in Sam's head... and nothing reeaallly happened, but... it's enough to creep us out, even if we didn't know its significance. Bravo!
Thank you for writing!
~ Clara Brighet

Creepy.

Lucifer waits in Sam's adult body. He will go to him but Lucifer will not win. Dean will save Sam. and Lucifer will be defeated by his own little brother.

That was creepy, but in very good way. Thank you for that story. I really liked how you portrayed protective Dean.

Bloody hell, it was Lucifer, wasn't it?! Yes! I finally guessed something right! If I'm wrong, please just pretend I'm right. I'd like to not have any more of a bruised ego. But, this is brilliant! I don't commonly review one-shots, not unless its their only story, or I searched for something and it came up, but I couldn't resist! This is so smart! I love how he was familiar, too, since Lucifer said they were family in the season 5 finale. I love it! Please write more young Sam and dean soon!

That is so darned creepy. Very clever, too, that you thought of that.

That was truly awesome and exceptionally creepy as well! And when I realised, just WHO that man was, I mean, in whose body, it got even creepier. I love the easiness of your capturing the brothers' voices and the deep bond they share, and a bit of sadness and inevitability in the aftertaste the story leaves..

He is whose?

WHAT AUSMKFK AHH KRMFKXOWOEMF

This is perfect. This is the first story I read after literally just finishing Swan Song. Dude, I think I'm broken. I didn't cry. And I still feel as sane as I did before, kinda... Maybe a little less... But still. I feel relatively whole. Well, aside from the fact that heart fell in the pit too... Maybe that's it... Maybe since I don't have my heart anymore, I can't cry. But I can still feel... Anyways, I love scared Sam and protective Dean. And I loved this.

this was really good! I have to ask, was it Lucifer he was seeing?

Eerie... Very eerie. The best kind of foreshadowing - and did I mention how eerie this was?

Majorly creeped out! Whatever meatsuit Lucifer was wearing,just about a creep factor of 10! And in Detroit!Aaaaaaaaa!

Very well done!

Wow, poor Sammy. I would have been creeped out too. :P

And knowing who it is, the sense of foreboding this brings send a chill up my spine.

Love big brother Dean though. :D (Aw always :P)

Nice job :)